| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anne-twilight On: December 03, 2002 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shock* *froze for a moment* Why did you do that???
Are you killing us? Oh y did you end up chappy 8 like that? Did you know that this fic make me cry?
You'd better update soon.
Sess is on his normal self, arrogant and stoic, even kag, she is her normal self. The problem is she doen't have sex with her new friend right? Oh don't even bother. I love this even more.
Even your summary and other stories, but you made them one shot, I wish you have chapter 2.
Please update . . I like this, because it's sess/kag fic, and I like it though. You know, better put this on Fanfiction.net, I'm sure you'll have many reviews.
As always,
Anne-twilight |
Reviewed By: Casey On: December 02, 2002 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Whatever you did to the first chapter, it worked. I diddent have to scroll to the side at all. *looks arounds* Thank you for reading my reviw and actually answering it! *is impressed* I'm assuming your in...collage? I wish I had as much free time ^^''' *sighs* Anyway, I appriciate (and probably the other readers too) that you give up so much time (even if you say you have nothing better to do) And put so much effort into your writing. It's really turning into a worth-while fan-fic and I find myself checking if its up-dated at around 12:00 every evening (I think best at night so thats when I do most of my school work ^^;) Anyway, keep up the good work and continue to write! (Don't burn your self out though! Then you'll never be able to up-date ^.^) |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: December 02, 2002 17:25 CST
Comment/Review:
OMg i love this story it's the best and your style of writing is great too!!!!!!!! Please keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!Write more soon i'm dieing to find out what's going to happen!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catleya On: December 02, 2002 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hye there!
thanks for your mail, I've re-read the fic and I still enjoy it as much...(but I can't tell you the difference between the "updated" and "not updated" chapters, cause I don't have the first to compare.) so do not hesitate to mail me ...and I hope, really soon!! |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: December 01, 2002 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG i love this fanfic!!! I like inu/kag stories but this one tops them anyday!!!!! You must continue writing i can't wait to find out what happens at the end!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LazyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
how do I get to your fan fic? I don't see the link. |
Reviewed By: karla On: November 30, 2002 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed the fanfic alot actualy i check it every once in a while to see if it's been up dated i can't wait to see what happens next so try not to keep me in suspence! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nicole On: November 30, 2002 07:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah! Don't listen to Hmm. Keep writing! XD; You don't have to take breaks. ;) Love this story, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: November 28, 2002 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wayyyyyyyy too off of touch with the show. it was original and... different. "B" |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ugggggggg......she did it with kouga?? yuck yuck!! lol well still wonderful but yuck! and sess was sorry...how sweet! well eagerly awaiting next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Casey On: November 27, 2002 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to start of and say that I love the story, but it seems like there is a new chapter out everday and your always up-dating. Ya gotta rest sometimes, eh? Anyway, I don't really pay attention on things like spelling errors so I can't say much about that, but there is one thing thats slightly annoying. I have to scroll down and to the side when I read this fic (it might just be my computer, but...) so if there is anything you could do about that it would be nice, but it's not absoulutly nessesary. The story of the fic is great. I always have had a special place in my heart *coff coff coff* for Sesshou-maru, so I'm happy to read a fic that does him justice. I kinda like the way it's modernized. Something I don't understand though is if they are in high school or possibly in collage. 'Cause they would be a tad old if they are in high school... Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that your fic is really great and I hope to read the next chapters soon (but don't die trying to get them all out so fast ^^''') |
Reviewed By: Iria On: November 27, 2002 16:25 CST
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I meant the entire story is completed. I love Sess/Kag pairings! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Iria On: November 27, 2002 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Ugh, forget updating and revising until you've put out the whole chapter! I can't wait for the next one... |
Reviewed By: catleya On: November 27, 2002 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for letting me know you had updated it! I check at least once a day, but it seems I had missed it anyway...
well, that was just so good. I love the three last chapters -except the part of Kag sleeping with Kouga ...hurk! poor girl! just going away with him and finding a way to get him lost could have been enough, maybe? -
I didn't see much spelling mystakes, except in the last chapter, but not so much anyway, so that's OK (...anyway english is not my native language...so my opinion migth not be worth much on that matter...). and I like the way you write giving the inner thoughs...that's great. you've definitly made me a Kag/Sesh supporter - just for this fic, usually I prefer Kag/Inu !! - eventhough he did act like a bastard. that part with the razor was scary!!
but I like the Ice king attitude...and witty dialogues! and I also like Kykio caracter. for once, she's not shown as a bitch, and that's great! she deserves a bit of happiness sometimes, ne?
so that's just such a good fic...hope you will update soon!! please, ne? |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: December 01, 2002 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story kicks ass! I used to be an exclusive fan of the Inu-Yasha/Kagome but you've converted me! Now I love both of the pairings! |
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