| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: ebban On: August 06, 2004 02:49 CDT
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i dont understand. You go from chapter 9 to chapter 11. Is chapter 10 the wrap up? I'm really confused. Please say you are going to finish this fic. I have really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: rachelw@cyberback.com On: August 06, 2004 02:48 CDT
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i dont understand. You go from chapter 9 to chapter 11. Is chapter 10 the wrap up? I'm really confused. Please say you are going to finish this fic. I have really enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: hrc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you have to update soon please im begging you this story is ssssoooooo good and just not fair so please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God you know if i didnt love sesshy so uch i would like hate him becuase of the way you made him in this fic but hey i cant so anyway update soon ok this is a really good fic
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 20:25 CDT
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UPDATE SOON! PLEZ So far the story is good so keep up the good work again UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ( THIS CAN GO ON 4EVER) UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: HUH!!??
Reviewed By: namichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 01:13 CDT
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HUH? what happened im soo confused. She was on her way to dinner with Hojo in chapter 9 and then there was no chapter 10 and chapter 11 was full of cutted parts, which i think should stay cutted. I agree with you butchering Kagome's character, and it was horrible that she was stupid enough to sleep with Kouga. BUT i LOVE your story nonetheless. PLEASE update and fix the thing with the chapters.
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 15:31 CDT
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what meltingmel said it is soooo hard to fine a good fic these days.....the last update was in april and now its july!!! do you know how fusterateing it is to fined a fic this good and never see it get updated!? and when it dose get updated its been soooo long that you forget that it even exsist!!! I realy hate when that hapens......this is a wonder full fic and I hope that you update A.S.A.P!!!!! it would be awfull...just awfull to see a fic this well wrriten and with such a great plot to go unfinished......just awfull.....please update soon *puppy dog eyes* I realy would be disapointed if you dont so please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: FallenHopes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story but I have one question what happen to chapter 10 its not posted right now and 11 is I find that rather confusing and I would really like to know what happened in chapter 10 please updat this story again soon and if you could please reload chapter 10. From a fan, FallenHopes.
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Title: i don't know
Reviewed By: whyme On: June 20, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I guess I don't really relate to Kagome's character. But please update cause I'm really curious, and lets be serious, you're good.
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Title: ...NO! NO NO NO!
Reviewed By: Meltingmel On: May 08, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimpers* No...god...no...just...NO! Don't end it there! For the love of Kami DON'T END IT THERE!!! You can't...*holds back a sob* You need to...*bottom lip quivers* HOW CAN YOU LEAVE AND NOT FINISH THE STORY?!!?!?! Oh dear god, I think I'm going to DIE! I'm SERIOUS. Do you know how goddamn HARD IT IS to find a well-written, great plot Inuyasha story these days?! That have the rating NC-17?! There aren't many of those! You are definitely one of the very few, and one of the rares that pop out with an amazing fanfic. PLEASE dear GOD you can't...just...oh god...I feel like I'm going to die. UPDATE THIS STORY PLEASE! Just...just...please finish it. I don't want to shove this story aside waiting for you to update it and never get to see it again because I forgot it existed. Gah...just...oh man...please...UPDATE OR I'LL EXPLODE! I apologize that this isn't a real review, and instead just a huge jumble of words begging for you to update, and I promise by god I'll be able to give you a real review at some point...but I can't...cause...I'm gonna tear my hair out...waiting for you...to update...this freaking story...GODDAMMIT! *pouts* Don't abandon this great story! You're so close! Just...just...PLEASE FINISH IT! *stubbornly vows that she won't die happy until this story is complete*
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *too lazy to log in* On: April 14, 2004 01:30 CDT
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Argh! *tries not to strangle the author* i'sbeen forever since you up dated! I like this fic, but ha totally forgotten about it till I got a story alert. it's a pretty good story, I just wish you were able to up date a little more often. please try to up date soon. please? *puppy dog eyes* later
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:00 CDT
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Ah, I'm quite glad to see that you have updated this. When the alert came to my mailbox, I recognized the title, but I couldn't quite remember the story until I read chapter eight again. I always enjoyed this fic, one of the handful of AU's I like based on Inuyasha. I like the emotional turmoil that Sesshoumaru is feeling. I can completely understand your need to revise. I always dislike my fics when I look back on them after several months. I think that's normal. You're not fishing for compliments...you're just being honest with yourself, because you know you can do better. I say that, but it's not a crit of your writing. I would have to actually go back and read this from chapter one to have an opinion on that (^_^) And everyone has times when they can't update. Fanfiction is the least important part of a person's life. Now that you've been victimized with my mini-ramble of the day... *grins*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 22:21 CST
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i like it! =D
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Reviewed By: sessyluvr On: April 02, 2004 15:21 CST
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Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for a long time here! I hope that Sesshomaru realizes what he's done and at comes to Kagome crwling and begging on his knees. (Sounds kind of kinky.) I know I would like that! Anyway, keep updating! Love the story!!!
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Reviewed By: sessyluvr On: April 02, 2004 15:20 CST
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Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for a long time here! I hope that Sesshomaru realizes what he's done and at comes to Kagome crwling and begging on his knees. (Sounds kind of kinky.) I know I would like that! Anyway, keep updating! Love the story!!!
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