| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: rox On: July 28, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really like this fic, please continue to update soon, i love the personalities and everything |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please pleas please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update very very very very very very very very soon! Pretty please? |
Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH,I DONT KNO IF I HAVE REVEIWED THIS BEFORE BUT WELL WHO CARES!AHHH I LOVE THIS FIC PLZPLZPLZPLZ WRITE MORE.hehe i was alil excited there |
Reviewed By: AJ On: July 24, 2003 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome!! I can't wait to read the rest of it. Can you please email me @ Shyness_35@msn.com when you update?????? Please ^__^ Thanx |
Reviewed By: Steph On: July 24, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic, cant wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Raine On: July 24, 2003 00:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
we are our own worst critique..but i think this is a very good story..really good. **grin** **likes it alot** so update soon will ya? and that "lemon" wasn't bad. (ooh...ice..sheesh) |
Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: July 22, 2003 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's not enough to make up for it all! sure it was nice of him to watch over her as she made her way home, but if he wasn't such a jerk then she wouldn't be walk home [at all. hehe] |
Reviewed By: Charlotte cry On: July 22, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that is the truly the best fic I have ever read. On a technical note, sometimes you almost use to many words to describe a simple thing, but emotionally this is the best I have ever read. I felt just how Kagome does, I felt her tiredness of the bet, I started crying when Sessho kicked her out and I felt her hurt and the despair when she held the razor. I'm not sure if it is the writing or the subject matter, or thefact that it is 1 in the morning, but emtionally your fic is very advanced. It draws emotions out of the reader and forces them to sympathize with Kagome. It is so life-like, when she held the razor, in away I wanted to stop reading the fic, to stop the emotions, just as Kagome wanted to stop the pain, but she pulled through and that pulled me along with the fic to see if she could heal. This is absolutely superb! Even the lemons seem more lifelike then regular lemons. They're weren't exploding stars and they didn't orgasm at the same time, like in almost all other lemons. Even the little thing with Kouga made the fic better. I doubt anyone wanted her to do that, but that is how life goes. It made the story and kagome that much more real.As I said before, I have never read a better fic, or at least never one so real. Please try and continue. |
Reviewed By: ladyfluffy2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh you better tell me that kagome is going to get back at him even if i love sessy he was a dick head to her then i want them to get together okay but other that the story is fantacte i would like to hurry and have to next chapters pppppplllllleeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeee.
ladyfluffy2003 |
Reviewed By: Kaleos On: July 21, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far on of THE best fanfics I've ever read. I read a LOT of fanfics and I'm always reading every day from 2 to 5 hours. But this is one of the best stories I've read by far. I usually hate Kikyo, but this story actually made me change my opinion about her. She's nice and very understanding in this story. I hope Sesshoumaru can make up for his stupid mistakes. I love the character roles very much. Please continue as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i can honestly say out of all the fanfics ive read this is one of the best!!!i usually dont like fanfics based in kagomes time if u get me but this one was well written and had a good storyline and i'm hooked so plzplzplzplzplz continue! |
Reviewed By: Yamdena On: July 19, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was extremely good. And wow, 100+ reviews. That's real good! There's one thing though, I just can't imagine HOW Sesshoumaru is going to make good with Kagome, if they are.
Please update this fic, I really want to see what happens next. I know saying this really doesn't help probably =P but it's worth a shot. =) Thanks. ^^
Oh and if anyone wants to mail me, just for the hell of it, gotensgurl04@yahoo.com. |
Reviewed By: The Lecturess On: July 18, 2003 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update damnit! I love it! Update! Update! Update! Don't make me hurt you. |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: July 05, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work. Just don't give up on this story again ok |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa that was intense. i love it. original idea. perfect! lol update please! |
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