| "Hidden Desires and Deep Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 11:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
amazingly ironic that you wrote this story on the same day that we got hit
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Title: K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations. This fic is top-shelf quality. Your writing style is ingenious and your grammar is off the charts. The story was engaging in the fact that it explored an alternate avenue of a quite canon moment, and it was made believable to boot. Thus, I have set my hand and caused my seal to be imprinted... the K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. How come you haven't continued this story? I would like to see this until the last angel or film whatever you prefer. Keep it up. BTW if you have problems with German ask me. It's my native language.
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Title: Hm....
Reviewed By: Spamwriter On: June 14, 2005 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was written quite well but the main reason I wanted to review and some one else has already said this but the German word for thank you is danke.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, i would love it if you made part 3, and yeah, i have seen 'the end of evangelion' it was weird like hell but i think i understood it somewhat... at least the main point of it. But anyway, i really hope you make part 3 for this!
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 17, 2003 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This. Is. The. Stuff. This is one of the best fics I have ever read, and not just in the lemon category. Your spelling and grammar are great; the style is well-suited to the fic and flows well. But most of all, I loved the situation you created and the believable and descriptive actions of the characters. The only flaw is that: Shinji and Asuka seem, well, all too willing to go all the way as soon as they start off together; and Shinji is WAY too skilled for a 14-year-old. :) But all in all, sweet story. Please whip up some more good fics!
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Reviewed By: jroc2k01 On: August 18, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, and even better lemon. Add more though. 2 chapters just does't cut it. |
Reviewed By: ???????????? On: August 24, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic and it's the first lemon that i read. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the way this went so much so that I encourage you to take the story without the lemon parts, well making them more lime scented and then expand on this. I like the idea that they would hide their realtionship from Misato Kaji and the others in Nerv and at school. I think you got the core of a great mainstream story. And when you do get it done ggo to Fanfiction.net and mediaminer to publish and see what others say. You have potential and I think you should try a normal story where the accolades and the challenges are greater and I think better for you.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: chan On: July 11, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I liked this ^_^. I'm a big ShinjiXAsuka fan, but the fic could be a little longer. The lemon is...a tad bit short and weird XD Asuka comes way~~~ to easy and fast (wouldn't happen in real life, believe me), but it's cute anyway! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Yuki-hime On: July 08, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great.
it there more?
one more thing it's Misato not Masato.
Still everyone makes mistakes.
great fic. |
Reviewed By: Neo Zeratul / Sephiorth 187 On: May 23, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the two Tags, I use both of them ^_^
Finally had a chance to read part two. Heh, I had a good laugh at that last part.
And BTW, you're right, End of Eva is about strange but after watching it twice I finaly understand it completely. Don't believe me? Email me at Sephiroth781@aol.com and drill me with questions. I'll be happy to entertain them ^_^ Domo Arigato again for a good read. |
Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool fic. I've just started getting into Evangelion. Yeah, I know, took me long enough. But, watching the first two episodes that were shown on Cartoon Network awhile back convinced me to start watching the show. I've just finished watching every episode, and just need to see the two movies. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I really think you should make a third chapter!! It's really good so far. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have three words to say about you doing chapter 3, go for it! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! ALL HAIL R80! i almost gave up on evangelion fics, ppl dont update and there aren't enough of them. then i though, 'what the hell' and decided to check for updates. ARIGATOU! even if there really wasnt a lemon in this chp, its eva! c'mon, im beggin u, make a part 3! even if i dont completly support this couple, ITS EVA! yay. same with digimon these days... argh. this fic is super kool, it acctually (somewhat) goes with the plot kinda. eva ficcys rule! ^_______^ |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one Rob!
Steve |
Reviewed By: alighthawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very few lemons come out good and while this was rather short, I had a fun time reading it. |
Reviewed By: HaerDalis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fic. a 10 overall is hard from me, but you came very close. one of the best S/A romances i've seen in a lemon. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. more. more. more. more. i really liked it. its awsome, u should write a sequel, or could you do a shinji+kaworu? |
Reviewed By: Shino Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic I'd like to see more. |
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 'Dende', German for Thank You. |
Reviewed By: lil Asuka-chan On: August 13, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS COOL! GREAT! ADORABLE! EXCITING n.n i loved it
keep writing n.n |
Reviewed By: The Lord of Terror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good! I liked the little arguments shinji and asuka had with their inner selves. |
Reviewed By: Neobeatchick On: July 03, 2002 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool lemon, but I think you twisted Shinji and Asuka's characters a bit. Maybe I'm a bit hard on you because I've contemplated how it would go down between those two myself. I always figured Asuka would screw Shinji out of a need to be "the best" or whatever her trip is. I doubt love would come into it with her-- and I doubt she'd be honest with herself, calling herself a bitch. As for Shinji, well, he would never have the balls to say everything to Asuka that he said, let alone make the first move. Shinji's a classic submissive. :) |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read better, but for what you have, given that it's a one-shot, a good story with the right balance of hentai and story.
I can see where this can be expanded, and given a larger scope but that's up to you, especially since this is set in the middle of the series and you have changed the chemistry with these two falling for each other. Well, get a preoreader to clean up the garammer and character profile and you get better. But not bad for now.
dennisud |
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