| "Hidden Desires and Deep Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the way this went so much so that I encourage you to take the story without the lemon parts, well making them more lime scented and then expand on this. I like the idea that they would hide their realtionship from Misato Kaji and the others in Nerv and at school. I think you got the core of a great mainstream story. And when you do get it done ggo to Fanfiction.net and mediaminer to publish and see what others say. You have potential and I think you should try a normal story where the accolades and the challenges are greater and I think better for you.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: chan On: July 11, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I liked this ^_^. I'm a big ShinjiXAsuka fan, but the fic could be a little longer. The lemon is...a tad bit short and weird XD Asuka comes way~~~ to easy and fast (wouldn't happen in real life, believe me), but it's cute anyway! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Yuki-hime On: July 08, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great.
it there more?
one more thing it's Misato not Masato.
Still everyone makes mistakes.
great fic. |
Reviewed By: Neo Zeratul / Sephiorth 187 On: May 23, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the two Tags, I use both of them ^_^
Finally had a chance to read part two. Heh, I had a good laugh at that last part.
And BTW, you're right, End of Eva is about strange but after watching it twice I finaly understand it completely. Don't believe me? Email me at Sephiroth781@aol.com and drill me with questions. I'll be happy to entertain them ^_^ Domo Arigato again for a good read. |
Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool fic. I've just started getting into Evangelion. Yeah, I know, took me long enough. But, watching the first two episodes that were shown on Cartoon Network awhile back convinced me to start watching the show. I've just finished watching every episode, and just need to see the two movies. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I really think you should make a third chapter!! It's really good so far. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have three words to say about you doing chapter 3, go for it! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! ALL HAIL R80! i almost gave up on evangelion fics, ppl dont update and there aren't enough of them. then i though, 'what the hell' and decided to check for updates. ARIGATOU! even if there really wasnt a lemon in this chp, its eva! c'mon, im beggin u, make a part 3! even if i dont completly support this couple, ITS EVA! yay. same with digimon these days... argh. this fic is super kool, it acctually (somewhat) goes with the plot kinda. eva ficcys rule! ^_______^ |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one Rob!
Steve |
Reviewed By: alighthawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very few lemons come out good and while this was rather short, I had a fun time reading it. |
Reviewed By: HaerDalis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fic. a 10 overall is hard from me, but you came very close. one of the best S/A romances i've seen in a lemon. |
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