| "Hidden Desires and Deep Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 11:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
amazingly ironic that you wrote this story on the same day that we got hit
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Title: K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations. This fic is top-shelf quality. Your writing style is ingenious and your grammar is off the charts. The story was engaging in the fact that it explored an alternate avenue of a quite canon moment, and it was made believable to boot. Thus, I have set my hand and caused my seal to be imprinted... the K.T.S. Seal of Awesomeness.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. How come you haven't continued this story? I would like to see this until the last angel or film whatever you prefer. Keep it up. BTW if you have problems with German ask me. It's my native language.
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Title: Hm....
Reviewed By: Spamwriter On: June 14, 2005 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was written quite well but the main reason I wanted to review and some one else has already said this but the German word for thank you is danke.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, i would love it if you made part 3, and yeah, i have seen 'the end of evangelion' it was weird like hell but i think i understood it somewhat... at least the main point of it. But anyway, i really hope you make part 3 for this!
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 17, 2003 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This. Is. The. Stuff. This is one of the best fics I have ever read, and not just in the lemon category. Your spelling and grammar are great; the style is well-suited to the fic and flows well. But most of all, I loved the situation you created and the believable and descriptive actions of the characters. The only flaw is that: Shinji and Asuka seem, well, all too willing to go all the way as soon as they start off together; and Shinji is WAY too skilled for a 14-year-old. :) But all in all, sweet story. Please whip up some more good fics!
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Reviewed By: jroc2k01 On: August 18, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, and even better lemon. Add more though. 2 chapters just does't cut it. |
Reviewed By: ???????????? On: August 24, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic and it's the first lemon that i read. Keep it up |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas! |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: hydraflame On: July 26, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually read angst od hentai lemon/lime fics XD. I thought that your fic was totally original, it had a uniqe sense to it and it was just basicly great! If you ever want to e-mail me back for ideas or just to chat, then that would really be okay with me. My e-mail account is hydraflame@gundamwing.net. Seeyas!cerulean |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked the way this went so much so that I encourage you to take the story without the lemon parts, well making them more lime scented and then expand on this. I like the idea that they would hide their realtionship from Misato Kaji and the others in Nerv and at school. I think you got the core of a great mainstream story. And when you do get it done ggo to Fanfiction.net and mediaminer to publish and see what others say. You have potential and I think you should try a normal story where the accolades and the challenges are greater and I think better for you.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: chan On: July 11, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I liked this ^_^. I'm a big ShinjiXAsuka fan, but the fic could be a little longer. The lemon is...a tad bit short and weird XD Asuka comes way~~~ to easy and fast (wouldn't happen in real life, believe me), but it's cute anyway! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Yuki-hime On: July 08, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great.
it there more?
one more thing it's Misato not Masato.
Still everyone makes mistakes.
great fic. |
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