| "Hidden Desires and Deep Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Neo Zeratul / Sephiorth 187 On: May 23, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the two Tags, I use both of them ^_^
Finally had a chance to read part two. Heh, I had a good laugh at that last part.
And BTW, you're right, End of Eva is about strange but after watching it twice I finaly understand it completely. Don't believe me? Email me at Sephiroth781@aol.com and drill me with questions. I'll be happy to entertain them ^_^ Domo Arigato again for a good read. |
Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool fic. I've just started getting into Evangelion. Yeah, I know, took me long enough. But, watching the first two episodes that were shown on Cartoon Network awhile back convinced me to start watching the show. I've just finished watching every episode, and just need to see the two movies. |
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 19:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I really think you should make a third chapter!! It's really good so far. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have three words to say about you doing chapter 3, go for it! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! ALL HAIL R80! i almost gave up on evangelion fics, ppl dont update and there aren't enough of them. then i though, 'what the hell' and decided to check for updates. ARIGATOU! even if there really wasnt a lemon in this chp, its eva! c'mon, im beggin u, make a part 3! even if i dont completly support this couple, ITS EVA! yay. same with digimon these days... argh. this fic is super kool, it acctually (somewhat) goes with the plot kinda. eva ficcys rule! ^_______^ |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one Rob!
Steve |
Reviewed By: alighthawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very few lemons come out good and while this was rather short, I had a fun time reading it. |
Reviewed By: HaerDalis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fic. a 10 overall is hard from me, but you came very close. one of the best S/A romances i've seen in a lemon. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. more. more. more. more. i really liked it. its awsome, u should write a sequel, or could you do a shinji+kaworu? |
Reviewed By: Shino Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic I'd like to see more. |
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 'Dende', German for Thank You. |
Reviewed By: lil Asuka-chan On: August 13, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS COOL! GREAT! ADORABLE! EXCITING n.n i loved it
keep writing n.n |
Reviewed By: The Lord of Terror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good! I liked the little arguments shinji and asuka had with their inner selves. |
Reviewed By: Neobeatchick On: July 03, 2002 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool lemon, but I think you twisted Shinji and Asuka's characters a bit. Maybe I'm a bit hard on you because I've contemplated how it would go down between those two myself. I always figured Asuka would screw Shinji out of a need to be "the best" or whatever her trip is. I doubt love would come into it with her-- and I doubt she'd be honest with herself, calling herself a bitch. As for Shinji, well, he would never have the balls to say everything to Asuka that he said, let alone make the first move. Shinji's a classic submissive. :) |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read better, but for what you have, given that it's a one-shot, a good story with the right balance of hentai and story.
I can see where this can be expanded, and given a larger scope but that's up to you, especially since this is set in the middle of the series and you have changed the chemistry with these two falling for each other. Well, get a preoreader to clean up the garammer and character profile and you get better. But not bad for now.
dennisud |
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