| "Hidden Desires and Deep Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. more. more. more. more. i really liked it. its awsome, u should write a sequel, or could you do a shinji+kaworu? |
Reviewed By: Shino Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic I'd like to see more. |
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 'Dende', German for Thank You. |
Reviewed By: lil Asuka-chan On: August 13, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS COOL! GREAT! ADORABLE! EXCITING n.n i loved it
keep writing n.n |
Reviewed By: The Lord of Terror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good! I liked the little arguments shinji and asuka had with their inner selves. |
Reviewed By: Neobeatchick On: July 03, 2002 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool lemon, but I think you twisted Shinji and Asuka's characters a bit. Maybe I'm a bit hard on you because I've contemplated how it would go down between those two myself. I always figured Asuka would screw Shinji out of a need to be "the best" or whatever her trip is. I doubt love would come into it with her-- and I doubt she'd be honest with herself, calling herself a bitch. As for Shinji, well, he would never have the balls to say everything to Asuka that he said, let alone make the first move. Shinji's a classic submissive. :) |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read better, but for what you have, given that it's a one-shot, a good story with the right balance of hentai and story.
I can see where this can be expanded, and given a larger scope but that's up to you, especially since this is set in the middle of the series and you have changed the chemistry with these two falling for each other. Well, get a preoreader to clean up the garammer and character profile and you get better. But not bad for now.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: Violent_S On: June 24, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A tad short.However, I needed some lemon , thanks. |
Reviewed By: Saijin Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell YES I like this fic! An excellent job if I do say so myself. More please? |
Reviewed By: annonymouse On: May 24, 2002 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST FAN FIC I'VE READ IN AGES PLEASE MAKE MORE OF THEM!!! CAN YOU DO A SHINJI/REI 1??? |
Reviewed By: Grahf 52 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your lemon is better than the ones i read in the past. Great Lemon R80 |
Reviewed By: NeoZeratul On: March 12, 2002 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually the first Fanfic Hentai I have read. Normally I don't go for this sort of thing. Great use of the backstory. I have heard many writings of this sort usually take on a "Sex Manual" type of feel. This one certainly did not do that, feeling more like a love story with a little hentai thrown in just for kicks. I loved it! Domo Arigato ^_^ |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus On: January 07, 2002 22:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the first Eva fic I've ever read. You did a great job and kept Shinji and Askua in character. Nice lemon. |
Reviewed By: NET On: September 23, 2001 03:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad. |
Reviewed By: kame2.2 On: September 30, 2001 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good work.
Every body knows that Eva fanfics come a dime a
dozen but this one stands a little above the rest.
I like the use of the often annoying unseen angel
that talks to people in there heads. Very good use
of back story as well. You did your homework before your first fanfic and the results show for
it. Great work and I hope to see more in the
future.
Kame2.2 |
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