| "Lust At First Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 17:52 CST
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i liked it but it seems in every story kagome gets preg. im sorry but somthing needs to change and i feel the ending was cut short like you just wanted it to be over.
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Title: from one pervert to another
Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok I' just Going to tell you two thing's 1) I really liked this fic. Even if it went from sesshou to fluffy with no telling why (it just suddenly happened…) and 2) I love the sex seen but I think you need to put more details, not just in the sex seen but through out…. I know I hate it when people tell me that It always makes me vary angry-_-…. But anyway I really like it, Just try to go for more detail and less briefing…
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Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 23:03 CDT
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hehe i love that last line, "have my babies"
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Reviewed By: SakuraSamora On: April 13, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, i really want more though, a sequal or something, what happend to her college goal, parents etc.
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Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: CelticMist On: April 11, 2006 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work, hun! I loved the fic! Hot, original Lemons and feelings are also in the package! Nice! Hope to read some more of this - new ideas are allway welcome on the Sess/Kag "market" ^_^' Keep on with the good stuff, Nice Greetings, CelticMist
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Reviewed By: I am Aishiteru148 On: March 05, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that was a little much, does anyone really do that on the first date? It was well writen, but it would have been more convincing if it was more realistic, then again it's fanfic adn you can do what you want....
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Title: Lust At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: sl On: December 16, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly LOVE this fic! great job, and dont worry the lemons were great(it didnt seem all fake like some of the ones that i have read recently) once again great job!
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: October 16, 2005 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'THE END'?! you know, you really should continue this piece. its very good. WRITE MORE DAMN YOU!! all i wanted to say. ^_^
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Title: NO FAIR!
Reviewed By: Kiyonekage On: July 14, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! that's mean..."THE END" my ass! that was great...you're ending it...GRRR! HOW DARE YOU!? great though, even though, i'm pissed that it said the end. *sob* that's mean...i was really getting into the plot there...*bawling uncontrolably* I WANT MORE! WAAAAAHHHAHAHAHAHA! You cruel evil writer...of course as an aspiring writer myself, i too would have ended it there...SADLY... Great story...i really enjoyed it...was confused at times, but i figured it out in due time...Stupid Kagome...clearly needed to pay closer attention in health class.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover06 On: July 10, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome
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Title: Lust At First Sight
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOT TOO LEMONY AT ALL!! I loved it! Especially that ending. I was ready to scream when I saw that this "one-shot" fic was so long, but I'm glad that I read it anyways. I can't believe that I was able to find all the time to read it! I enjoyed it very much!...I just wish it wasn't with Kagome. This now gives me reasons to start hating her like some of my other friends. lol. Well...maybe not entirely. You know what you should have added at the end though? If they named their child Rin. Well it's 2:24 in the morning and I got to go so...Tchao!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Forsaken Soul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 01:19 CDT
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hahaha nice ending i like it a lot
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Title: Lust At First Sight
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 14:49 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Mystical Miko P On: February 21, 2005 15:13 CST
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Sessho and Kag are not normally characters i would place together in a fic...but, I absolutely LOVE this fic. I'm really glad you gave them a different setting rather than work with feudal japan. It's what made this fic work really well. and I love dirty kag and even dirtier Sessho *yummy* Thank you
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