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| "Lust At First Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Reviewed By: Phlie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, you know that I loved this not only because it's your fic, but also because I LOVE Sess/ Kag together. So, in the future I want more work from you. *gets out the whip* I can be a slave driver! Better hop to it! lol | Reviewed By: Nanaya On: December 31, 2002 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but... I have a prob with the whole flight thing.... I know i shouldn't pick about this but it's nagging at me >_ | Reviewed By: Bulma75 On: December 29, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey ^_~ Good story, very nice lemon. Chao | Reviewed By: Josh On: December 25, 2002 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a somewhat freaky...but very enjoyable little story. Story was very descriptive and I mean descriptive in more ways than one. All in all I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully perverted story :) | Reviewed By: LazyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel like i've read this before somewhere........but anywho, i feel bad 4 inu, no action for him =P~ hehehe. I was wondering the same thing as Duono Tsuin. Why was sesshoumaru naked in the first chappie oO; ??? I can't visualize him being naked though, darn! lolz hehehe i'm obsessed with sesshie ^_^ Er.... i'm getting sidetracked here so.......as i was going to say......Great Fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: yuii On: December 22, 2002 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love sesshoumaru and kagome pairings...and i'm a pervert and a freak, and i love lemons...hot lemons and this was hot....it was a great story.. | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only giving you a 9 overall this time because .... *sniffles* What!? No lemon??? Waaah!! *snickers* j/k I guess it was because ... I miss Sesshoumaru!! :(
And I guess that all the hints of her "condition" made me realize that I miss someone (I'm still thinking of you and wishing you all the best, Italia!!:)
Adam and Teela ... heh. Personally, I'm not much for the new He-Man series. Maybe it's the voices or something *shrugs* So they're one of those couples that is SICKENingly cute?? *lmao* Now I know what everyone goes through when my boyfriend and I, uh, are ... in public. *heh*
So she forgot to call her mom?? *tsk tsk* Her mom's gonna worry about her!
Well, that's all for me for now, I've got to go finish my email. *lol* ^_^ | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmygod ... I'm SO glad you decided to continue this!! ^_^
*he he he* Fluffy. *grins*
*blinks* So I'm NOT the only hentai around here!! XD Lemons rule!!! Who called you "sick!?" *gets into her fighting stance* Lemme at 'em! Grrrrr... *curses flamers* If you want to flame SOMEone then flame me for leaving such LONG reviews and spoiling stuff (SHAME on you for reading reviews first!!)
Not everyone goes through the excruciating pain that is associated with their first time.
No kidding. It wasn't THAT painful--you hardly remember. *blushes bright strawberry red* O.O Um ... *decides to read the story*
He felt his anger growing knowing that he would have to change his plans, `no good morning loving.'
Awwwwwwww ... guys and their way to say "Good morning." Aren't they just SO cute!!!! :D
`she's not a one night stand girl...I'm the one who took her virginity.'
Once again ... awwwwww!!! Phew!! I'm SO glad that the first chapter wasn't the last/only one! Yes!! Sesshoumaru's cool!!! XD
*he he he* Sesshy's a cute pet-name for him too. *snickers* Guys are funny ... as soon as they've been with you, they think you should prowl around naked all the time! *lmao* And the shower's irresistable to a lot of them as well. (not that us women always mind;) ...if he were to join her they would not emerge for an hour or more. *smirk*
Grabbing one of the hand towels he handed it to her
*busts out laughing and rolls around on the floor for an hour*
"Of course mom! She helped me clean up last night!" Lisa quickly supplied, winking conspiratorially at Kagome.
Alright, Lisa's cool 'cause she covered for Kagome! Ch!! As IF the mom's stupid!
"Just don't spill too much, hmm?" Uh ... does she mean what I THINK she means!?!?! *lmao* That woman is funny!! Hmm... I agree with Kagome. "Doll," ain't that great, bub!! *chuckles evilliy* I suddenly wish that "I" had an Explorer with those darkly tinted windows--and I don't like SUV's!! *lol* MMM.... nice lemon. *wink* Yeah, they like being "milked." *falls on the floor in a fit of laugter* I'm SUCH a hentai!! XD
Muahahahahahaha!! Ken SO got what he deserved!! (GEE, I wonder WHO did that to him;) *evil laughter grows*
Sitting up he grinned slightly at her flushed look, her daydreams were becoming more and more frequent.
O.O At first, I was like, "Whoo hoo, he's there!! Damn mothers and their interruptions!! Uh ... they're doin' it with her mom home??" *lol* What a dork I am. I KNOW that you meant "SHE grinned," but ... it was SO funny!! Then I was like, "Wait ... so he's just WATCHING her!?!?" *lmao* I could've died from laughter. It was all a dream after all. *sigh* I hope he's cursed with similar ... dreams. ^_~ He deserves it.
So I'm guessing that her parents knew that Sesshoumaru was in Japan and that she's missing him?? *sniff* They're SO sweet!!
"Tell us bout your first time!" all the girls chimed.
Hn!! Why are people so nosy!! *he he he* And I'm sure they're wondering WHO it was with. ;)
Lisa waited until Kagome went to the bathroom, easing herself off the floor; she grabbed the paper she had been itching to give Kagome all night long.
What what WHAT!?!?!? What is it!! PLLEEEEAAAASSE say it's Sess's address or something!!! *flashes her prettiest puppy-dog eyes* Pwetty pwease with sugar on top?? ^_^
*blinks* YOU need a beta-reader??? *grins* If I have to SUFFER and read your new chapters before everyone else ... then I will accept!! *suddenly remembers that she is only available Tues,Wed,Thurs and sometimes Friday ... and frowns* But you probably already had a bunch of offers anyway. Nevermind. -_- And it's not like you NEED it, but most of us like having a beta-reader so we can get over the "Is it right, did I do this well!?" paranoia. Like the old saying goes, "Two heads are better than one" and it's always nice to have two opinions.
WELL, I've been blathering on for too long now and wasting all the space for more reviews ... so I'll run off for now. Don't worry, you're doing GREAT, so far. Keep 'em comin'! ^_~ | Reviewed By: Neko_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! Another Fluffy fic!! I just love fics with Sess in them... they're so out of character for him but they fit so well!! *kitty grins* Keep writing!!! I love it!! | Reviewed By: Kithkin On: December 05, 2002 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nifty! It's a lemon, with adequate dialoge and plot to flesh it out and make it worth reading, I adore those. Plus, it's tastefully naughty.
I'd love to see this continued, so I'll keep checking back. If I find anything to criticize upon later readings, I'll let you know, but I got a warm glow from reading the first time....
Thanks! | Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 04:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Eeep.....I messed up the formatting in the other review. the ones that say "[i]" are supposed to be italicized.
Sorry 'bout that. *bows* | Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMM......lemony goodness is [i]always[/i] nice....
The only thing I would suggest would be the type of document you use.
I've noticed that ".doc" makes a lot of stuff like "&hellip" or something.
The way I've avoided it is to use a ".htm" one. If you have Netscape, you can get to those by going to Netscape Composer....I think it's Control/shift/n....but that's on my computer and I dunno about yours.
Anyway....this was absolutely delicious (albeit hard to read because of the "&...." stuff).
I just recently wrote my first lemon to my Sess/Rin fic (lemon not posted yet) and I don't know if it's any good. *cries*
I can read 'em, just not sure if I can [i]write[/i] 'em. --'
Anata | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* That was ... wow! You've been reading "TheBet" a lot lately, haven't you? *winks* (Yes, I'm behind in my reading) I'm only guessing that because it could explain why you've skipped ahead to the S/K lemon. *heh heh* I really like this, yes I did!! However ... with the summary I kind of expected it to be longer:
Did they fall in love at first sight or was it simply lust at first sight?
Now that's exactly what I wanted to know. Actually ... I'm more curious why Sesshomaru was naked in his room in the first place. Does he sleep naked or something?!?! O.O
Oh, do you remember how I said:
"Well, if you ever get the urge again *is CURSING you, so you will!!!* then write more great fics that just happen to also contain Inu-Yasha/Kagome lemons!!"
. . . I take it back. -_- Instead, write more Sesshomaru/Kagome lemons!! *lol* Hell, I'd even settle for a Inu-Yasha/Kagome/Sesshomaru lemon right now!! o.O *lmao* Ohmygod, I can't believe I just said that. *runs off to hide in a dark cave for not thinking before she types*
PS Speaking of things that are dark ... did you see the newest Inu-Yasha ep on CN last saturday?? Well, I'd just like to say ... dark haired InuYasha is so hot!!! O.O Ooooo, could you imagine Sesshomaru with dark hair!? *falls off chair* | Reviewed By: i ain't tellin' On: November 27, 2002 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
* 1st blojob in an inuyasha fanfic
* dirtiest Kagome's ever been
* biggest boner since showgirls | Reviewed By: your friend ~.^ On: November 25, 2002 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
kat!...oh my god! u r such a pervert! hehe, can't believe you wrote this! i likies!! well gurl, holla at you later! and you had better know who this is! | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
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