| "Lust At First Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool. i like it. no wait. i LOVE it! and holy shit was that a lot of lemons! I LOVE LEMONS!
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 17, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great you should seriously think about doing a sequel to this story......
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Title: YOU ROCK
Reviewed By: dark angel kitty On: October 12, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love inuyasha way more than i do sesshoumaru but this fic rocks you made me think more about sess/kag together it was great i really liked it
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Reviewed By: ioke On: August 05, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! i woul;d really love to read a sequel if you have it planned out?? your story is totally awesome!! it was so good!! lol =P anywyas... i want to know more about what happens like inuyasha's reaction and etc... email me when you have new stories out at chipahoy702@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Anime-angel On: July 17, 2003 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! That was really good!! I liked it very much! I know you haven't updated for sometime...But if you would I would love you forever. Please I'd like to know what happens! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Masaio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Awesome S/K!!! definently one of my favorites! But you have got to write a sequal when u get the time!
I can't seem to find any other good S/K fics tho! *sad* Instant message me later if you know some good ones, later girl |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: June 11, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot, Hot, Hot!! Good job on the lemon.(Pant)
Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Kitty On: April 05, 2003 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is like the bes Sess/Kag fic ever!! I really enjoy it. Im Lookin forward to read more of ur fics!! Also i put the the grammer rating a 9 cuz i the first couple chaps u spell Sesshoumaru wrong. So the rest of it are soooo good. A great ending!! |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's mate On: February 25, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more More MOre MORe MORE!!!!!!!!! I want to know what is going to happen next in the story oh and if u do update let me know at Molokaians655@yahoo.com N-e way Jamata De Sayonara |
Reviewed By: panangkb04 On: April 13, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading hentai for years and I must say very few authors can write a lemon like you do. Keep up the good work and could you please have a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: February 02, 2003 13:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story...maybe could you make added part? About Kagome having the baby? |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: January 24, 2003 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur writing is unique, especially that this took place in the future made it off the hook. I love Inuyasha, and putting fluffy in their was ingenious. I like He Man too go Teela, go Adam putting them in there was fun to read. Th lemon, was the zestiest, love them lemons, ya know when like throws you lemons girl I gatta give it up to you you know how to make some fine azz lemonade. Anywasy keep writing its fun to read, I like your style. Props to ya.
Kilala ^_- |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru's lover On: January 08, 2003 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love lemons they are the best thing to read in the
whole wide world.I spend hours on the computer just
reading them *smiles*. You know no one has the right to
call you sick they are the one who "CHOSE" to read the
story so it their fault for THEIR curiosity. You know
I just LOVE sess/kag lemon. Sesshoumaru is HOT!!!!
*blushing* I can't understand how so people like
inuyasha instead of Sesshoumaru *sad face* besides
I wonder why some write can't be more like you. AND
I am not saying that their writing is bad I mean that how
come people can't write such ~NAUGHTY~ o.O lemon *laughs*
I just love your "lemon" and as for the person who
sent you such a harsh flame they can shove it up
their *BEEEEEP* I've got to got my mom is calling
*sob, sniff*
p.s keep on writing how you are. ^_^
from
Fluffy's lover |
Reviewed By: Eoife On: January 05, 2003 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first i was surprised.Kagome just getting with a guy on the first night! It was pretty good!S/K pairings are the best,And the fact that it was a good lemon is even better!Good Job!My enjoyment factor was way over 10! |
Reviewed By: Melissa On: January 01, 2003 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! How could you stop there!? How could you do that?! Thinking about going some more your story is very enjoyable. |
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