| "Don't Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 21:38 CST
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*eyes wide* wow... poor brad. i would cry if that happened to me. and wow that line "brad makes god scream like a girl" i seriously laughed out loud for like 5 whole minutes. the brad/farf moments you do are great! this is a totally cool fic and i can't wait to read more. so you better post or else!!!! >, |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 20:44 CST
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Ayan should end up with Yotan! (i'm reviewing from ch 5 so i don't know what has happened so far ~.~ foolish me
Mara |
Reviewed By: Toudou Higiri On: April 02, 2003 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No sorry I didn't. :(
Keep up the good work, your very talented.
-Toudou Higiri
P.S- Did you send it to Adorable_Nagi_Naoe@hotmail.com? |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 03:41 CST
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Ohoho, Schu-chan at Weiss'? Please go on writing and post the next chapter soon! I'm so curious how this encounter will take part. ^^ |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi On: March 14, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* for a while there i thought that you were going to kill Nagi-kun, then I would have had to come after you with Hiei's katana. but none the less....Bombay's Prodigy lives so your life is safe, for now.
I can just picture Omi glarring. *grins* HAHAHAHAHAHAH!! Ayan got what he deserved MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Keep this story going because my previous threat is still in play! *starts to look for Hiei's katana without him knowing*
~the REAL voidsenshi~ |
Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: March 06, 2003 12:39 CST
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Hiya!
Glad to see yet another chapter of your wonderful story! *wails* I'm just so happy. :) As for your lemons/limey's? and the couples.. Schu/Ken, Ken/Schu, Brad/Schu, Omi/Nagi and the other way around. I don't give a flying fuck. o.O ::coughs:: (Sorry. Didn't mean to get "vulgar" :P)I just mean.. I think you really don't have to ask us, readers, what we want. (Sure, it's nice but..)Just do what *you* want to do! It really doesn't matter to me. I'll be happy anyway, no matter what you write. ;)
Anyway, Chapter X was just super! Especially the thought of Yohji sleeping? through all the commotion and finally coming down with the line of "what's going on?" :P *pictures Yohji yawning and looking sleepy-eyed with an expression like 'wtf!?'* XD
So.. Schuldich's like on his way to the others, now or not? :) Aww.. Ken's knight in shiny armor. *sob* It's all so cute. Just as Omi's so protective of Nagi. It's definately sweet. You see, before this,I wasn't really such a big fan of the O/N pairing but now.. I've totally fallen in love with them~! *hugs* So now, I'm busy writing a fic with N/O in it myself. ^_^'Just hope things will work out. >__ |
Reviewed By: Toudou Higiri On: February 21, 2003 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is sooo kawaii! I love Omi x Nagi and Brad X Schu. and I'm a big angst fan so keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 13:12 CST
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Ohhh, you're mean. How can you let us hang like that? *wants to see Schu-chan at Weiss* ^.^
Hmm, a lime-pairing? How about Schu/Ken? *grins* Yeah, I know that wasn't an option but I still would like it. ^^
But despite pairing you'll chose, please update soon. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! I forgot to add another one of my longest comments or ratings. Sorry ^-^'. Anyways,...
YAY!! You've finally updated. I've to agree that cliffhangers are sometimes neat ^-^, because you can attract a lot of readers who find the story quite exciting. Now I want to know what's going to happen next!
Like I said about your style, it's great. Not bad. It's very interesting.
I've noticed some misspelled words in your last chapter there [chapter 10] ::nods:: Uh-huh, it's there. But I think I should shut up before anyone gets furious about my constant pointing out to grammar mistakes, I myself have to read my fanfics a few times and notice a few misspelling too XD.
VERY VERY original. I like N+O pairings :D I like them. The other pairings aren't that bad. A+O is also not bad, but I kinda feel awful for Aya there... chapter 10, I mean. Very sad. Poor guy.
YUP! I've really enjoyed your fic, please keep updating!! ^_^
Overall, it's a very cute story though.
I've really no idea what has to come next ^-^', maybe a new mission, Weiss has to take action or something, Schwarz need to talk about Nagi being with Weiss... I don't know... ^-^ Well... just hope you're getting some ideas. Keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: February 09, 2003 10:01 CST
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OMG!! I'm not around for a while and look what happens! Aya's about to behead poor little Nagipoo! It makes me wonder though *who* exactly should be in a madhouse (besides Farfie). Yohji or Aya? Tch.. choices, choices. :P
Anyway.. Loved it once again. *nods* Also the Ken/Schu part. I'd say: just ditch Yohji A.S.A.P! (Not that I hate the guy or anything) But, he's doing Ken no good anyway! ;_; That way, Schuldig can come, comfort Ken and make him happy. And then we'll be happy as well cause we get some Ken/Schu lemon. And then it's *all* good. ....Or maybe not. :D
Just ignore my rambling! :P I only wanted to let you know that I adore this fic and await your next chapter patiently. :)
*pompoms to you*
Ciao!
~S.C~ |
Reviewed By: Yanagi-sen On: February 06, 2003 01:25 CST
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comment for chapter 9... hmmm... how about... YOU LEFT IT THERE?!!!!!!!!!!! A cliffhanger worthy of one of mine... you are evil... and you must post the next part SOON!!!!! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Yanagi-sen On: January 23, 2003 00:07 CST
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A cliffhanger... but not as evil as mine apparently... YES!!! Nagi-angst coming up! ^_______^ |
Reviewed By: gale On: January 22, 2003 15:52 CST
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Im not really a Ken fan but I love Yoji/Schu and dont mind Yo/ken/anyone(ran,Schu or Brad)and I guess the suggestions obvious...
good story too by the way |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 11:13 CST
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Neeee! Aya can't hurt Naggles! *glomps Nagi* Write more! And Ken and Yohji.. and Schu.. *whimpers* Gaaaah! so much suspence! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! You're so *mean*. The style of writing is 10 because you write angst very well. >Don't mind my English> Really angsty. OMG >_ |
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