| "Don't Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 11:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Neeee! Aya can't hurt Naggles! *glomps Nagi* Write more! And Ken and Yohji.. and Schu.. *whimpers* Gaaaah! so much suspence! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! You're so *mean*. The style of writing is 10 because you write angst very well. >Don't mind my English> Really angsty. OMG >_ |
Reviewed By: Yanagi-sen On: January 13, 2003 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes... you are evil... reminds me of my own cliffhangers. Poor Nagi... nagi-angst is the best!!!! ^____^ Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: January 10, 2003 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!
I hadn't visited mediaminer.org for a while and I come back only to find you've updated! Whoohoo! Yay!Pompoms for you, girl! Ahem.. Don't mind me, just feeling a bit hyper, that's all.
Anyway.. again, you did great, indeed loved the new chapter.
I wonder what Aya's going to do with/to Nagi. (of course I don't mean this the wrong way. ^^*) Uh.. he's not going to act all jealous/insane/Aya-like and beat poor little Nagi up, is he?! o.O (Tch. Why do I always think the worst of Aya?):P
I also wonder what's to become of dear, good old Yohji *shakes her head & mutters something that sounds like 'madhouse'. Lol. Nah, just kidding. ^^* I'm sure you'll find a way to make him "sane" again.
I hope you update soon (though I understand if you don't have it finished right away.)'Writersblock, not being able to go onto the net and etc' Yep, I know exactly what writers go through. ^^* So.. take your time (not *too* long of course) and I'll wait patiently for the next chapter.
~S.C~
lvogel@zeelandnet.nl
(Just in case you'd like to point out to me personally that I blab too much. >_ |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi On: January 09, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GAH*
*falls off of chair*
How...how could you end it there?!!!!!
No fair!!!
NO FAIR NO FAIR NOFAIRNOFAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU MUST WRITE MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE?!!!! MORE!! LONGER!!!! AND ANYTHING ELSE YOU CAN THINK OF!!!!!!!
I THURST FOR MORE!! GIVE ME MORE!!!
*Hiei walks into the room with a big hammer and hit her over the head*
Hiei: Would you calm down!!! People are going to think that you are a psycho!!!
ME: ano, Hiei-baabas. You didn't have to hit me over the head!!!!!
Hiei: hn.... *walks out of room*
Me: HIEI COME BACK!!!! I'M SORRY!! I'LL BE GOOD!!!
*runs out of the room to chase him down and get her revenge* |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhhh! Cool fiction! I really hope you update soon. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Akari On: January 08, 2003 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute....
Not sure what else to say without sounding overly critical. But if you'd like to discuss it, feel free to e-mail me at shinigami-no-miko@juno.com |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi On: December 25, 2002 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayaya!!
I love this fic!!!
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooon!! You hear me!? I said..
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
and yes I know that I sound like a crazy person, but hey , whatcha' gonna' do? sooo yeah
update ASAP!!! |
Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: December 23, 2002 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey hi!
Just read your story til so far and I just love it!! Especially the last chapter where Nagi's hand sticks out and Ran sweatdrops because they think he hasn't noticed. I can't help but laugh out really loud at the mere thought. :D
I also like all the different pairings. I do feel sorry for Brad & Aya though. (don't you think you're a bit cruel to them? :p) I mean.. Nobody loves them!! Awww.. that's so sad.
Crawford(in OOC-mode): I feel unloved. ;_; *sniff*
Aya: ...Shi-ne.
Artyx:Don't worry I still love you!*glomps both men*
Crawford: -__-0 Yay us!
Anyway... You've done a great job so far. Keep up the good work!
~S.C~
P.S Takatori is such a mean bastard! *drops an anvil on him* ;) |
Reviewed By: Jade Green On: December 23, 2002 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Waai! Omi and Nagi are so cuuuuute! ^.^ *huggles them* I can't wait for more! *bounce* |
Reviewed By: Rika-chan On: December 20, 2002 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Waaaahhh! ;__; This fic is so sad... so far..
Heh..I like it when Schu plays with other people's minds. ^.~ But even better than that, is when he's being so sweet, like in this fic. ^.^ I'm really sad for him, though... ;_; I hope he'll be happy in the end..as well as Bwad-chan. ^.~ |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
don't turn this into a yo/ken fic. Schu needs some loving in this one. and I do so LOVE an angsty schu! |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more more!!!
I want to read more!!!
onegai? ....*pout*
Im begging you!! write more!!
this story is sooo kawaii....
poor Nagi... atleast he is with omi-kun now!!
(I love NagiXOmi ^_^) Soooo yeah.... please write more as soon as you can! I can't wait!! |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
it's good. I love me some good schu angst. get ken ken to make him all happy. :) |
Reviewed By: Hope On: December 02, 2002 17:31 CST
Comment/Review:
The fic is very interesting so far. I'd like to see it continute. You might wanna double check your grammar and spelling, there were a few mistakes, but not too many overall. |
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