| "Subjects of My Sanity" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rudete On: March 31, 2003 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Agreed, it will be to soon for Wu to talk.
But please dont make him suddenly grow Kung Fu skills and kick the "boss" around, make it slow and painfull for the bastard... but I just could not believe WuFei to all of a sudden be hable to kill the guy on his own, not after all those years of being helpless.
That's my grain of sand (I suspect you tought of this already)
-_¬ nods nods
Bye |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEYA! Well, I have been rather busy these past few weeks, but kept seeing this bieng updated, so of course, it went on my 'to do' list. Am I ever glad I finally got around to reading it. This fis is great! I love the interaction between the boys, and the relationship between Heero and DUo is perfect! (1x2 fan right here, can't you tell? lol) I really like your characterization of Wufei. His determination is perfect, and his outlook on reality and his resilience to his situation is so perfectly portrayed. You haven't shoved their suffering down our throats; you just let it happen. I like that. Your writing style is not usually what appeals to me, but in this case I like it. It is obvious you have put a lot of work into editing your fic (Something I am SO guilty of NOT doing! lol) and I appreciate that, as it makes it a joy to read.
The original aspects of the fic are wonderful; they capture interest from the first page and don't let you go. You have a great thing here, so jkeep at it and I hope to see the end in a few weeks! (please? lol)
kkls,Leth |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could I have missed this for so long. This is great stuff - intense, interesting and well written. Love the interaction between the characters. Will be impatiently waiting for the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Chara On: March 28, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Chara~ Mor plse. *Car pulls up random guy walks up to Chara*
~Random guy~ sign here plse *holds out clipboard and pen*
~Chara~ *signs* k
~Random guy~ *disappears*
~Chara~ *hands keys 2 T-chan* here, look in the trunk.
~ t-chan~ *Looks in trunk 2 find pocky, and a wiggling bag* *opens wiggling bag*
~Chibi Duo~ *hops outta bag and glomps t-chan* |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 08:58 CST
Comment/Review:
-giggles- yay. an update. I can't wait to see what happens nect. Keep up the good work and please write some more 2X1. YAY. ja ne |
Reviewed By: Rudete On: March 25, 2003 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally!!
I was wondering if Wubear got caught again!!
ooohhh 1x2 cuddling!! =^,^= |
Reviewed By: Page of Wands [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 22:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Woohoo!! Awesome!! I come back after my vacation to find not one, but THREE new chapters!! Brilliant!! I really love this fic!! I haven't read many Gundam W fics lately, but this is one that i'm closely following........^^ Oooo, I love the developing relationships between Trowa and Quatre (although Q is kinda oblivious.....), and Duo and Heero (so cute!!!!)!!!! That last scene when Heero went to Duo's house was perfect ;_; *happy tears* And, the return of Wufei!!!! Hm....lucky Duo decided to come home, or they might not have found him~!! And, there wouldn't have been that cute fuzzy scene!!!!!!! Aw, you do a great job writing all the characters, and the POV change adds a lot of different perspectives that make it even more interesting ^______^ Great great!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!! I hope Wufei's alright~!!!! And.....i probably mentioned this before (i'm such a nag), but I'm dying for them to find out about Duo's not-dying ability........hm.....or maybe they won't ^^. I guess you get to decide, but I do so love angsty situations. *_* Call me a sadist. blah. Anyways, it's late and i'm rambling....and, I guess I should leave a longer comment since this is technically for three chapters........but i'm lazy and I'm avoiding homework. >.> Yes, yes I am. But..........excellent job on the new chapters!! And the whole rest of the story too!! It's one of my favourites!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* yes you do hold the power of the pen... and damn. I had thought I'd gotten a nice replacement too. See Joe here *points to left* is a decent author... I think... I figured that he could finish off the story cause he has no life (I say he doesn't so he doesn't so there! HA!) But now that you've reminded me of all the twists ad turns that you know... and ONLY you know... damn... Bye Joe!
That was odd... then again so was your chapter SO WE'RE EVEN! Only difference is that your chapter was good... guess that means you get the point for this round. Not that it is a round... nor do we have points... wow... I think I'm loosing it. That or I'm gaining back what I once lost? o.O
Anywho chapter was odd but VERY VERY good. Poor Heero. I feel bad for him passing out and all and then POOR WUFEI!!!!!! You will tell us how he escaped/where he's been, right? Pwease! COme to think of it poor Duo too. Not only must he now deal with both Heero AND wufie but he's got his own problems as well... I tink I should give them all cheese baskets! That or maybe muffin baskets? With chocolate muffins. I like chocolate chip muffins. They are yummy!
- Storm |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SCREAMS IN FRUSTRATION*
And you just LEAVE IT THERE????
*stomps about in a bad temper*
Well, I really shouldn't say anything, seeing as how I don't review EVERY chapter, but I LOVE this fic, I dance for joy when there is a new chapter, and I am DYING here....DYING I TELL YOU!!!
Ahem...um...more?
Talon |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 09:13 CST
Comment/Review:
WOWies. This was good. please update again soon. I wanna see some 2+1 action. to :-). yay, keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey over 30 chapters doesn't bother me!!! (Mind you I'M not the one writing it. I wouldn't be able to write it. I get bored of writing the same story. Longest one I've ever pulled off was 4 chapters, unfinished and what is/was done was crappy.)
Anywho what a turn of events. That was a lot of musing on Duo's part as to what was going on. A GREAT look into the mind of "your" Duo. A great set-up for the next part of your story too! I mean so much thinking, SOMETHING major must be happening. *Bounces in chair* I cant wait!!!!!!
Errrrrrrrr please quickly. Skip school, dont go to work, dont eat, YOUR NOT EVEN ALLOWED TO SLEEP until you get the next chapters done! SO THERE!!!! Well... maybe I'll take that back. I mean we dont want you dying when the story is unfinished, right? Well not until we can find you a replacement anyway. *grins* Sorry. DOnt take that in a bad way., it wasn't meant to be, I'm just to tired (havn't been able to relax at all since 7am its now 9:30pm) to care about "tact"... not that I have much of it on a good day either... o.O
- Storm |
Reviewed By: darkmagic On: March 19, 2003 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
ahhh!! i hope you get it out soon, ;_; and yes, i really wanna see more 1+2!! yaaaay they're so cute >_ |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 12:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Woah... just read over that message and the spelling is just... woah... o.O Very scary! Just so you know I actually can spell story, finished and want I just cant type them very well. *sigh*
-Storm |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 12:37 CST
Comment/Review:
YOUR SO CRUEL! To everyone! That includes the characters and the readers. *cries*
I cant believe you would do that to poor Wufei. And then have Quatre out of action and cutting us off from knowing whats happening with Duo and Heero and their rescue! GAH!!!
Is this really the final strech? This stiry is going to be finsihed soon? I know you probably wnat it to just dissapear into thin air but I know that I could read this thing forever! Well in anycase good writing and I cant wait for the next part (like thats unusual for me, aye?)
- Storm |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 10:05 CST
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Poor Trowa... having to go in there all alone. *shudders* I dont think I could do it. I KNOW I couldn't do it. Scary!!!
Getting better and better. Cant wait for the next! ^-^
Storm
ps. I know this ones short and I'm sorry for that. I have a hockey tournament this weekend and the last game was brutal. I feel like a bruise with pulled muscles. We did make it to the Championship though. Thats were I'll be headed in a few hours. |
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