| "Princes and Soldiers Series" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: June 18, 2004 01:14 CDT
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I really hope it's not over and if it is, I hope to see a sequel on the horizon. But well done well written. I loved how Noin came to understand and accept the strange relationship between the three of them and how she managed to find where she fit in. This chapter was well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 22:40 CDT
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Oh. My. It's over?! *sniffle* I'm gonna be sad... what a fantastic ending though. Explaining but without getting overwordy or prosy. Just right. The analogy of the 'gun in need' was breathtaking. It explained just what Heero and DUo were to each other, and allowed Lu to see, eventually, where she fit in. It won't be easy...but then the 2x6 wasn't easy either in these conditions. I was sort of looking forward to seeing Noin and Heero try to get along. I mean, sure, they're in love, but living together...I can just imagine the arguments about not sleeping with more than one gun in the bed, what to do with the dog...*gulp*...babies...*whimper* But, to cut a long review short, I absolutely loved this fic, particularly for the very unusual 1+2, and the very hot 2x6 XD Thanks so much for writing!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 17, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this ...cool ending, can't wait till your next story...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 31, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw another great chapter... I don't have to much to say except ,I love this story and please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Heero grounds me, but Mill makes me fly. Awww, what a phrase...*sigh*. And Noin is falling hard for Heero, hm? I like Noin in this fic. Tough, hard, but with a core of caring. Okay, she's obviously got it bad for Heero, but I think she'd have taken the same decision even if it had been two other guys in the same position; I don't think she does want to see any of her men die. Confirmed by her first reaction on seeing that Heero and Duo had killed the guards. Next chapter! Please!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 24, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter..Duo is really getting to Noin LOL... please update again soon....
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 11:40 CDT
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Lol, they made Lu laugh! Well, you'd have to be made of stone to be completely impregnable to the Maxwell charm. It's interesting that when she's concentrating on being mad at Duo she seems quite admiring of Heero's abilities...Promising for Duo and Mil's plans! Yeah, I can see a potentially happy ending for this fic; falling in love, getting married and having lots of little...er, tanks or something. Keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 27
Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: April 24, 2004 05:48 CDT
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Damn you and your damnable chapter-cuttingness! I was just getting in to the chapter and then it ends. I cryed out in frustration and almost pulled my hair out! I REALLY hope you get the next chapter out soon.
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: April 12, 2004 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fanfic was amazing!!!If I had the chance I give you a 20 or higher.Please I beg of to write more.Man,you did such a great job on this fanfic.If only my friend was into GW.She'd love this to death.Tootles
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 31, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a writer gose you one of the best ..I love this chapter please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 11:53 CST
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Okay, however scum-grubbing those journalists were, a couple of them deserve a badge of merit (or a Darwin award...) asking those kind of questions to Heero's face...Though it was the ones attacking Duo who were most at risk without knowing it. I loved Sally in this chapter, and her fighting attitude. Which is good, they might need an ally soon.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 23:00 CST
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I think I've already said this, but my favourite aspect of this fic is the strange, almost symbiotic friendship between Heero and Duo, and how Mil copes with that. So this chapter hits all my buttons :) You illustrate the complexity of their need for each other, and how Heero can be both very strong physically and mentally, and very dependent emotionally. Kudos to Mil for taking on the job, as well as he could! Next chapter, please! I'm curious to see how Heero is going to fit Noin into his rather regimented and exlusive range of affections.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 01, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really,really,really,really,really,liked this chapter and want to read more your a great writer ,the best please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 23:05 CST
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So Heero and Noin are getting on like a house on fire (flames, injuries, death...). I love the humor in this fic, and I hope to see more of Heero and Noin's, er, courtship. The situation revolving around Duo is a lot less funny, but I loved the way Mil responded. Aww :) It'll take more than that to tear those two apart! Anyway, hope you update soon (you've been spoiling us these days, four updated fics in a week??) I'd love to see more.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:30 CST
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Not that's not a pairing I've run across yet - Heero and Noin - but with the way Noin gets when she's in uber-military mode, I can see the possibilities. Great opportunity for comic relief as well! Ugh - those guys in the bathroom gave me the creeps; I like how you had Duo handle it. Cute foreplay between Zechs and Duo, too. Da-yam - I'd take "orders" from Zechs anytime... : )
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