| "Princes and Soldiers Series" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. The plot was very good for a sort of action romance and you can feel the love.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 21, 2005 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story .Please write more...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 20:38 CST
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'Well, it's nice that one crazy Shinigami and a completely repressed super soldier can find each other... right before they die.' Damn, I laughing and getting a lil' bit sniffly both at once >< Great action-filled chapter! And Jake's cool; he's realistically afraid of dying, but, in an echo of Duo's choice when the latter was fifteen, Jake sticks to his post and gets ready to die for his friends and the greater good. I liked Duo's txt message in the previous chapter too (you're writing too fast for my frazzled schedule these days ;) didn't have time to review that one). Maybe a bit long for a guy who's hacking into the system and doing sabotage at the same time, but without useless fuzz, and there's the sense that Duo knows he's going to die when he wrote it. The bit about Heero dodging Trowa was chilling ^^; Those G-boys are just too mission-orientated. Except for Heero now. Damn, he's become the most reasonable of the lot! Can't wait for the (last?) chapter!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 08:50 CST
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"Untamed, dangerous? Pantherish, jungles, no rules, hot, steamy..." Hell yeah! Man, finally have time to read this (but I wanted to be relaxed when I did, and this week- oy vey). Hah, that put that criminal AND his skanky lawyer in their place! I liked the 'demo' :) And of course the end. Sweet :) Hehe, I love Noin in this fic; she gets the last word and its a classic. Great fic all in all, with an interesting take on the 1+2, and an actually believable 6x2 (well, now a 2x6x2).
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Reviewed By: priscel - (^_^) On: January 20, 2005 03:18 CST
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"... I just wanna sleep, walk around in my underwear, and drink soda." *BEAMS and glomps kracken* haha I love that line! Some people don't understand the delicacies of soda! *snickers* i knew there was more! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 18:06 CST
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WAIT!! i so feel that there are chapters missing *pouts*- Ch. 33 was wonderful and I think Zechs should switch roles with Duo more often, but what was he going to show? what happen with the court case? What was Zanse' plan? Did he have an angle or a judge or jurior in his pocket? I can understand if this truly is the end (especially with your other works) but so many unanswered questions...
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Reviewed By: Fawn1987 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 19:18 CST
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I like this allhough the noin heero pairing is a little weird but i like it i realy do
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Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: January 12, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I have over 30 stories in my mail box @-@.And now I have to review them all..Wow, well you see I haven't been home to read stories.So I am way behind.So now what to do ?There are to many stories to review so I'm doing a mass review .Yah again I know I've done this a few times before and I'm sure you all don't like it but I rather take the time to read the stories ,than take the extra time to write all those reviews .Because you see I have to leave again and I don't know when I'll be on line again..So ok to all of you wonderful writers I have read your stories and your updated stories because some of you have updated 2 or 3 times since I last reviewed you. And I really have enjoyed or are enjoying your stories..Wow that was a mouth full .I'm taking a breath now..~_~I really wanted to let every one know I'm reading every chapter and If this review shows up on multiple chapters or different stories by the same author I'm sorry but I'm doing the best I can ..I'm running from hospital to home and it is whereon me out..So all of you please keep up the good work and so long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading...Patty ..Sorry this is not a very good review..(*_~)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 04:13 CST
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show what?! show WHAT!? geezz do i haveta wait?! *whines* 'You know, sometimes I wish I was gay,' *snickers* that was a great opening line for this chapter! It was so very thoughtful of heero and the conversation between he and Zechs really shows how much Zechs does understand the the connection between Duo and Heero, it was so hmm brotherly, homely especially when they started talking about who beat who. *snickers to self* man i'm going to be dead on my feet today... Take care Kracken-sama!! update soon
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 13:27 CST
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Once more, love the Heero/Duo link. I laughed my ass off at the Heero-Zechs dialogue. 'I let you win' - 'which time?' LOL! And I'm really digging Noin. It must be kinda hard to manage somebody like Heero, but she's got his number :) What's Zechs's strategy? Is he going to get Duo to run an obstacle course and show the jury just how much damage he could have *really* done if it were him on the video? 'This is a real G-pilot in action, ladies and gentlemen. Accept no substitutes'.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 03:43 CST
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Damn the bastards, I was outraged that the stupid lawyer would request such a thing and even more surprised that the stupid judge would want to see his abused healing scars knowing good and well the improbability of them having ANYthing to do with that shooting. Man the justice system is fucked up sometimes. Oi and where are the other g-boys during all f this? I know this maynot be the story's focus but i have to wonder where their support and views lie. So that's part of Zanse plan, to use and embarass Duo with the pain/abuse he suffered at the hand of Oz butts which effectly distracts a few of the Preventers' best so that he can carry out other plans prehaps work angles at getting himself out of prison or kill/take hostage the judge's family member to sway him or prehaps provide the necessary time for whatever that's ailing Duo to take full effect, a virus of some kind was given to Duo maybe. And Zanse ,through his lawyer if he can't be present, wants to witness its effects. I highly doubt a simple stomach flu would take Duo down so hard. I mean i knew he needed more sleep but i don't think that the flu would have been that bad because of his lack of it. I'm so glad you continued this series!! You are amazing ya know *glomps kracken* i'm really going to sleep now.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 12, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and I want to read more of it so please update again soon ..I love noin in this story she really puts up with a lot...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 15, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is just not fare..Poor Duo why is he always the one getting hert?love this story .Please update again soon
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Title: I remember this!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read some of this ages ago. So glad you're adding to it!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 14:49 CST
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"You two make me feel like the only adult here." Hah! Noin's a great addition to the family, I think. She might also be a voice of reason when Heero and Mil feel like storming the prison or something foolish later. Sounds like Duo's been framed in an attempt to get the bad guy out. Once again, I'm rarin to see the great 1+2 you crafted in action, the strange symbiotic relationship between Heero and Duo, and Mil's managing of it all. Next chapter!
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