| "Princes and Soldiers Series" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 23:00 CST
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I think I've already said this, but my favourite aspect of this fic is the strange, almost symbiotic friendship between Heero and Duo, and how Mil copes with that. So this chapter hits all my buttons :) You illustrate the complexity of their need for each other, and how Heero can be both very strong physically and mentally, and very dependent emotionally. Kudos to Mil for taking on the job, as well as he could! Next chapter, please! I'm curious to see how Heero is going to fit Noin into his rather regimented and exlusive range of affections.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 01, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really,really,really,really,really,liked this chapter and want to read more your a great writer ,the best please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 23:05 CST
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So Heero and Noin are getting on like a house on fire (flames, injuries, death...). I love the humor in this fic, and I hope to see more of Heero and Noin's, er, courtship. The situation revolving around Duo is a lot less funny, but I loved the way Mil responded. Aww :) It'll take more than that to tear those two apart! Anyway, hope you update soon (you've been spoiling us these days, four updated fics in a week??) I'd love to see more.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:30 CST
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Not that's not a pairing I've run across yet - Heero and Noin - but with the way Noin gets when she's in uber-military mode, I can see the possibilities. Great opportunity for comic relief as well! Ugh - those guys in the bathroom gave me the creeps; I like how you had Duo handle it. Cute foreplay between Zechs and Duo, too. Da-yam - I'd take "orders" from Zechs anytime... : )
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 18, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter... Milliardo was tasty and Duo was wild... Umm I was just wondering did Relena have any thing to do with Duo getting beat up that time? I know this is not Relena bashing .But some times it's like you allude to it.. Well I don't know ? But I got to go so TTFN...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:43 CST
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'Soldier's icebreacker', lol! ok, that's gonna be interesting. Lovely chapter, with humour but also with the emotions between Duo and Zechs being highlighted. But I must say that the part that I like the most about this fic is the relationship between Duo and Heero. A strange, almost symbiotic friendship which is well described and believable. I like the way it is not tender (Heero throwing stuff at Duo, lol) but still as deep as what Duo shares with Zechs. A very rare treat in the fanfic universe!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 16:39 CST
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Odd! Very odd! Heero falling for Noin. Well at least as far as I know this is a first for pairing these two characters together. Different but good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 30, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really ,really ,really like this chapter.. This story is great .. and I look forward to reading more of it and others that you write.. so please update again soon so I can read more..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 10:55 CST
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Ah, I was just thinking that Heero was unlikely to be interesting in a high-bred party fluffball. Excellent solution, and very funny :) I loved Duo's reaction to that. Loved every minute of the fic in fact. It was also nice that the guys were hassling Zechs for his past war crimes which MOST people would still consider more serious than his life style.
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Reviewed By: Duskie- On: December 19, 2003 01:19 CST
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So, sweet!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 14, 2003 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sweet but he sould not always be on the bottom... Update soon TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 11:36 CST
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I loved the gentle humour in this chapter, although the serious part of the conversation was well done too. It was a realistic portrayal of two guys trying to talk about something intimate, and the way they talked about it outlined their individual characters. The party is going to be interesting though...Will they manage not to kill any of the guests? :D
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny (FB) On: November 29, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, here it is to you straight.... Duo with Milliardo, origional! Heero asking for a pet, hilarious and Duo nearly killing himself and the three of them suspenseful. Reading this story.... Priceless!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 29, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool Iv'e ben reading this story and I can't wait til the next update ...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 10:12 CST
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Wow, I can't believe you're adding a chapter to this! And it looks like more may be to come. Although matchmaking for Heero sounds like a potential disaster (he may be better off with just a dog...) I'm looking forward to more!
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