| "Princes and Soldiers Series" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phire On: February 04, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey jus wanted to let u kno how very much im enjoyin ur story and look forward to the next chapter. ur a wonderful writer ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heey! U can't leave it there! More more more!
You write really well...and the idea is neat. I'm not too fond on injured, sulky zechs, but...well, it gives Duo a chance to lead, ne? Please put up more soon! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Jr. On: January 23, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you are developing the relationship between Duo and Zechs. The plot in this one is even better than your previous 6x2 story. Like some other reviewers have said, Duo is really smart and preceptive in this story. I can't wait for your next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Milliardo's pride is a good barrier for the relationship. I particularly enjoyed the conversation between Heero and Duo in chapter five. It was sweet. The insight was nice. I'm very much enjoying this fic. |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 08:06 CST
Comment/Review:
A stubborn, prideful male, just typical isn't it. It does really lead them into the most embarrasing situations doesn't it. Milliardo is not immune to this male affliction either it seems. But, I think his assumption of Heero and Duo being "just friends" is an assumption as well. As we all know what to assume something really means if you break the word apart(ass u me)
Looking forward to the next chapt.
Gossamer Wings |
Reviewed By: Night On: December 19, 2002 15:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice one this! Can you write more with a bit of 01x02 that will be nice too... With a jealous 06.
I'm waiting for the next chapter(s) |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 09:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the ending of chapter two. Well, I enjoyed the whole fic, but I particularly liked the last paragraph. It is good to see you are writing another Zechs/Duo fic. The M.D.C. was an intriguing touch as well. I look forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Now we know where Duo's picture was taken, but we need to know more about the MDC. I take it Heero was not with him there (the reason for his lost look perhaps?)
Love your portrayal of Duo's intelligence. I dislike stories where he written as a real idiot and not just playing the fool as a cover.
I see a bow to author Dacia, will have to read more of her work.Also liked the tattoo idea. Does he have anymore? I guess Milliardo will see the rest of it, eventually.
"He wasn't in any danger of compromising himself with someone like that." YEAH, RIGHT! Famous last words of someone about to fall(for Duo that is).
Will wait paticently for the next chapter.
Gossamer Wings |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 11:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, what a lot of information and questions went through my mind with this first chapter. It looks like it will really be a great story. Milliardo will sure have his hands full trying to deal with Duo(a master of mirth). I liked your description of their gym outfits esp. Duo's shirt. Where can I get one of those? You start off with Duo being a prankster, but we all know that he is much more than that. Other questions pop into my head: What is this mission they are training for; Does Sally really know or suspect Heero and Duo's relationship. Other items I liked: Duo described as Peter Pan and mischievous elf. And Heero's dry sense of Humor, of course he wasn't correcting him, just joining in in his own way. I'm intrigued about Duo's file picture also. When and where was it taken? Will we find out more about it?
Guess I'll find out when you post the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Aasae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow I don't normally go for anything that doesn't have Heero and Duo together but I absolutly love how you wrote their friendship in this:) Good work! |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 14:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story i hope you add a new chappy |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 02:38 CST
Comment/Review:
YES! 6x2!! *huggles and drools* All that hair x.x Bishounen overload. I was going to write "hairy bishounen overload" but that sounded a little wrong. Mmm, just a little -_-;
Anywho, as always, an intriguing beginning that leaves the reader wanting more. But that's your speciality so I'm not all that surprised that I plan to sit in front of my computer for the following days waiting for the next chapter to come out!
*chanting* More! More! More!
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great. No suprise, I've read all of your stories, thus nothing less than perfection was expected from me. *G*
I'd like to get an e-mail when you update, that possible? (making puppy dog eyes)
felidae@osnanet.de |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was well written, imaginative and thought provoking. I was highly entertained and look forward to the rest of it.
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: allysan On: March 11, 2003 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT GREAT GREAT MORE!!! Please write next chapter soon! |
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