| "Saiyans Return" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: whats up with that On: August 05, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa cool sequel even though its been 2 years since an update lol
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Title: PLZ write more!!
Reviewed By: lucas5574 On: January 13, 2004 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i Love you writeings, PLZZZ RIGHT more i lived by your storeys for a week end, if read both chaptes like 2 or 3 times, i love them!!, but i wish you would move back into the ertoic encounters a little more i realy liked them too
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Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 07, 2003 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again I manage to stumble across a story I've been looking for for a while. What luck! |
Reviewed By: Severina On: June 30, 2003 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so bad for Bulma i'm actually crying. How can she compete with Shani? She can't. I know Vegeta said destinty chose for them to be together but that seems like something he just sort of accepted. I get the feeling he loved Shani more than he ever loved Bulma and that he really does wish he was with Shani insted. And i know that's not your intent at all and that i'm probably reading more into it based on my own personal experiances of being the girl who doesn't even come close to being second best. So i really relate to how Bulma is feeling, and even add my own take. And you know what that means? FABULOUS JOB! If you can actually make a reader cry by connecting with them so initmatly then you have done your job as a writer. That's why you're my favorite! Keep 'em coming sweetie! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 27, 2003 05:47 CDT
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GREAT WORK!!! |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I've finally found you...at MediaMiner anyway. I'm surprised it took me so long.
Anyway, it's yet another excellent work of fanfiction, and minus a few grammatical errors it's fine. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 04, 2003 05:08 CST
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Nice to see some updates for this story and for the other one. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: April 03, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that last paragraph of chapter 7, it put all kinds of images in my head. i like how you're merging some characters from your other fics into this one. very good. |
Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hon!
Very excited to see a new chapter and a little bit of loving between Gohan and Videl. I know he's STILL angry at his father, but how long has it been? And besides, we all know that ChiChi is a little less than affectionate shall we say? (What happened to her anyway? Is she still living in the woods all ticked off at Goku? Something tells me i should know this answer)
Anyway, keep up the great work!
Severina |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love how this story is unfolding! Yet I am so sorry that you're not getting any reviews...you can see that people are reading from the visits! Doesn't that suck??? Well keep it up...and I'll be hear to check it out!!! :)
Love ya!! |
Reviewed By: ursula On: March 17, 2003 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i just read your story and came to the end to find that it wasn't finished! aahhhh!!! it's such a good story, but you haven't updated it for three months!! are you no longer going to update it? it's so great and i really hope you do!!! (please!!!) |
Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it. Vegeta wandered around in space for all those years and if he's as experianced as we always portray him to be then it is EXTREMLY possible and entirely plausible that he has another kid. But...how will Bulma react?
sorry it took me so long to read this! Damn mediaminer! |
Reviewed By: Cora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
OMFG LADY V THIS STORY ROCKS!!! I LUV THA TNEW CHAPTER SO MUCH!!! YEAHHH!!! ^______^
-Kala |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: December 07, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, ready? this is going to sound crazy.
THREE CHEERS FOR LADY VALTAYA!
HIP HIP HOORAY
HIP HIP HOORAY
HIP HIP HOORAY!
Can you tell I've missed your wonderful stories? You have always had the most wonderful story lines.
I wonder how Vegeta is going to handle his new found daughter? And, will Max tell the Skulls about his daughter to help his mate? |
