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Reviewed By: Nue_Ehr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm well known for not reading anything over 1 chapter long. But this fic caught my eye. It was so awesome! I loved every moment of it! All in character, your characters were so believable, it was hard not to think they were actually in the manga. I agree it was very clever the way Li was the bad guy, then was the good guy. And Lynn was very... *Just smiles* Hehe. The Ending was very yummy and worth it.
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Hige Heartwell On: August 18, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Great Great Great and did I say great. I spend 2 hours reading this and enjoyed every moment. I love the way you write and I love how amazing the plot unfolded before my eyes. I loved it all. You've got a gift and should keep writing. Hige Heartwell over and out.
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Reviewed By: Tegasus On: March 15, 2004 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was absolutely fantastic!
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Title: Oh Man....
Reviewed By: Special_K On: January 02, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE your fanfiction...It was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Yes, I did want some action too okay, so um yes, please continue! *^-^*
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Reviewed By: Cheddar Bob (too lazy to sign in) On: December 30, 2003 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a lovely, work, just lovely! I love how you interweave Li, Shang, and Lynn into it... I'm half thinking this was in the manga! ^^;; Your writing style is breath-taking, and I am very fond of the way you describe things and adapt each character's personality so precisely. ^^ You are an excellent author! By the way, I found this statement immenself amusing: "He didn't want anything scaly growing on or in him. His body was already overcrowded. There was absolutely no vacancy for a damn dragon." ^^ After I finish this story, I'll have to check out your other works, no? (By the way, I love Invader Zim! Gotta love the cackle! ^_~)
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Reviewed By: Telanu On: November 15, 2003 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story kicked ass! I have been looking everywhere for some good PSoH fanfic, especially of the yaoi variety, and I finally found it! *celebrates* Great plot -- I love how Li started off being the villain and later became sympathetic, that was clever. You write great snappy patter, especially for Leon. And I love the idea of a sexually insatiable D. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: 2emily On: August 31, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic kicked ass!! I read this a little while ago on: http://www.yaoilovers.com/fanfics/psoh.html
Anyway this fic was written so nicely and the characters were fleshed out as well. All in all, a very enjoyable read. Otherwise, I wouldn't have read it all in one night. |
Reviewed By: Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm so when is the sequel coming? ::grin:: I really enjoyed this... ::Grin:: |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 02, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! You need to finish the next chapter!!!!! :P |
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
So glad I found this. So good that I couldn't pull myself away until I'd read all the chapters. Looking forward to the ending! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr On: March 03, 2003 15:46 CST
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I'm so glad you put li and lynn together! i'd be even happier if you made a side story with them:) |
Reviewed By: Ragan01 On: March 02, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:08 CST
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Oooh. Evil Shang... But don't kill him off yet, he's so angst causing! Poor Lynn. Post more soon, please! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr On: February 17, 2003 13:41 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! i see some li/lynn actions! i hope they get together and shang is getting really really creepy! please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Lee On: February 17, 2003 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, you ate getting freaky girl keep it up. And hurry up so D and Leon can get their freak on |
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