| "The Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Brat On: February 08, 2003 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
More please. |
Reviewed By: Ragna01 On: February 08, 2003 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You want reviews?????!!!!
The fic is excellent...amasing...amusing...I'd love it like I'd love D.
Congratulations!!! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You should put Shang and Lynn together, I think that'd be way cooler. I also think it is so cute that you put Li in Leon bodies, it causes so much tension! Great story so far! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: January 30, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I want to see how this ends. |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 14:59 CST
Comment/Review:
YEAH! Li's back! Li's back! And I like this Lynn character, he sort of morbid but I still like him. But Shang is starting to creep me out...lol. Anyways can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo that's not good... Poor Leon... and what's in the jar, anyway? Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Brothers can be helpful?! I was not informed of this! Oh well. Please, update soon! Poor D, with the bad dreams and the horniness and the mean pet. When's Shang going to show up again? Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy, I got on the computer and instantly came to your story! And I got to read two new chapters, yay! Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ergh. Ghosts. Poor Leon, now he's horny and haunted. Or is it Shang? Please, I'm begging (yet again ^^) you to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Leon. He didn't get to boink D... yet. Another great chapter and I can't wait for Shang to get involved! |
Reviewed By: lydia On: January 10, 2003 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Glad to see more! Of course...I just keep wanting more too! Great story, can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn (can't sign in^^) On: January 10, 2003 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Mwahahahaha Hehehe great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one, lemon hopefully? Or will the evil twin invade and stop all the lemony, angst-causing goodness? Please, update soon!! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't believe you killed Li, I was starting to like him...well at least he has a twin brother (hope your not planning to kill him too)! I'll be watching for your next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 02:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Li lies not like the living! Sorry, annoying Julius Caesar reference... Twins are good. Twins cause problems. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good and I really enjoyed reading it. Please, update soon! |
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