| "The Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 18:46 CST
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ooo that's not good... Poor Leon... and what's in the jar, anyway? Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:49 CST
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Brothers can be helpful?! I was not informed of this! Oh well. Please, update soon! Poor D, with the bad dreams and the horniness and the mean pet. When's Shang going to show up again? Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 16:52 CST
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I'm so happy, I got on the computer and instantly came to your story! And I got to read two new chapters, yay! Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 23:22 CST
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Ergh. Ghosts. Poor Leon, now he's horny and haunted. Or is it Shang? Please, I'm begging (yet again ^^) you to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 00:08 CST
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Aww, poor Leon. He didn't get to boink D... yet. Another great chapter and I can't wait for Shang to get involved! |
Reviewed By: lydia On: January 10, 2003 19:15 CST
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Glad to see more! Of course...I just keep wanting more too! Great story, can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn (can't sign in^^) On: January 10, 2003 13:45 CST
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Mwahahahaha Hehehe great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one, lemon hopefully? Or will the evil twin invade and stop all the lemony, angst-causing goodness? Please, update soon!! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:31 CST
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I can't believe you killed Li, I was starting to like him...well at least he has a twin brother (hope your not planning to kill him too)! I'll be watching for your next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 02:32 CST
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Yay! Li lies not like the living! Sorry, annoying Julius Caesar reference... Twins are good. Twins cause problems. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 12:39 CST
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Wow, this is really good and I really enjoyed reading it. Please, update soon! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:08 CST
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I don't really know what to say. I could praise your story over and over again but you already know that your a great writer. I'm still alittle disappointed by Li's death; I WAS starting to like him. Well as long as you continue I can't complain. Just please, whatever you do, I beg you not to kill off his twin... Anyways, great job! Finish seven soon! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 18:54 CST
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I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! Update again, please!! |
Reviewed By: Lydia On: December 16, 2002 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Petshop of Horrors. You have done a great job setting up a situation that will get Leon off his butt and into action! Hooray for you. Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 17:58 CST
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I'm so happy you updated, I can't wait to see what happens next....I hope D and Leon get together soon. |
Reviewed By: silvermist On: December 13, 2002 18:36 CST
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I loved this story, will you email me when you update it! My email is blink_182stalking101@hotmail.com |
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