| "The Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Telanu On: November 15, 2003 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story kicked ass! I have been looking everywhere for some good PSoH fanfic, especially of the yaoi variety, and I finally found it! *celebrates* Great plot -- I love how Li started off being the villain and later became sympathetic, that was clever. You write great snappy patter, especially for Leon. And I love the idea of a sexually insatiable D. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: 2emily On: August 31, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic kicked ass!! I read this a little while ago on: http://www.yaoilovers.com/fanfics/psoh.html
Anyway this fic was written so nicely and the characters were fleshed out as well. All in all, a very enjoyable read. Otherwise, I wouldn't have read it all in one night. |
Reviewed By: Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm so when is the sequel coming? ::grin:: I really enjoyed this... ::Grin:: |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 02, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! You need to finish the next chapter!!!!! :P |
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
So glad I found this. So good that I couldn't pull myself away until I'd read all the chapters. Looking forward to the ending! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr On: March 03, 2003 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you put li and lynn together! i'd be even happier if you made a side story with them:) |
Reviewed By: Ragan01 On: March 02, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh. Evil Shang... But don't kill him off yet, he's so angst causing! Poor Lynn. Post more soon, please! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr On: February 17, 2003 13:41 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! i see some li/lynn actions! i hope they get together and shang is getting really really creepy! please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Lee On: February 17, 2003 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, you ate getting freaky girl keep it up. And hurry up so D and Leon can get their freak on |
Reviewed By: Brat On: February 08, 2003 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
More please. |
Reviewed By: Ragna01 On: February 08, 2003 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You want reviews?????!!!!
The fic is excellent...amasing...amusing...I'd love it like I'd love D.
Congratulations!!! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You should put Shang and Lynn together, I think that'd be way cooler. I also think it is so cute that you put Li in Leon bodies, it causes so much tension! Great story so far! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: January 30, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I want to see how this ends. |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 14:59 CST
Comment/Review:
YEAH! Li's back! Li's back! And I like this Lynn character, he sort of morbid but I still like him. But Shang is starting to creep me out...lol. Anyways can't wait for the next part! |
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