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Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that was a kick ass story! an there better be a very happy epiloge or you will deal with more than a lynch mob! ^_~ trust me ya dont want to get me angry! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 10, 2003 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sweet, you know that? That was a cool ending, but it still would have been great to see Yugi with a girlfriend. Its kinda sad to see that he is still going through things alone. I hope that your one-shot fanfics come out soon as well. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 09, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read chapter 9, and it was very sad (emotional). I really wish Darcy and Yugi woud stick together, but I guess it had to turn out this way. Excellent work here! I really hope that the ending is good, because it was very much a shame to have Darcy not being with Yugi. I suppose, not remembering him was better then death for Yugi. I bet his heart is squeezed from both pain and love, pain that he will never see Darcy again and he still harbors love for her. I wish you the best of luck with this. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 09, 2003 07:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, man! It looks like the Darcy and Yugi aren't together anymore! That's wack, but oh well. Thanks for the update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Yugi and Yami fan 12 On: April 05, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 was so sad but I want to know what happens to Yami and Yugi. Will Yami die please don't let him die. Please update soon because I can't bare it to end like that. I really like this story alot because of the Drama it had I cried on Chapter 8. Keep it up too. I hope Yugi and Yami are okay because they are my favorite characters in Yu-Gi-Oh. WELL UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: FEVER On: April 04, 2003 19:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE SOME MORE OR I'LL BLOW YOU'RE @** OFF
FEVER:* Pushes Bakura away* You bastard! Quit doing my reviews. This is mine! Anyways, write more! this is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!11 |
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 02, 2003 06:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This was pretty good! Thanks for the update! It looks like the battle was pretty intense, which was cool! I can't wait for the next update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 21, 2003 08:35 CST
Comment/Review:
It looks like things are heating up big time! I'm so glad you updated! It was surprising to see that Tea still believed in Yugi very much. It makes you think about how loyal and good friends are, especially in Yugi's case. Now, the moment of truth is here! Will Yugi and the others defeat Pegasus and Yami Bakura? Or will the evil tree in Yugi's heart and soul be the key factor that gets everybody killed? Also, will Yugi save Darcy in time? I have questions, and you hold the answer! Thanks again for the update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 20, 2003 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see that you updated, and the latest chapter was sweet, all the way! It looks like Yugi and the others have a big battle ahead of them! I wish Yugi the best of luck, and it was cool to see that Tea still belived in him! I feel sorry for Yugi, and I hope he pulls through soon. Thanks again for the update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Yugii and Yami fan 12 On: March 19, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You for updating! I hope Yugi and Darcy get back together. Please update soon too and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Yugi and Yami fan12 On: February 12, 2003 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a cool story so far. What happens in the game shop. I want to know how Yugi and Yami are doing. Keep it up and please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 31, 2003 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello. This is getting very interesting and good! I'm glad you kept your head in the game. I knew that you would do well! I hope you write the next chapter and post it up soon! The other reviewers like your story as well. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 28, 2003 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting more better with every chapter! I know that this will turn out extremely good! I'm glad to that you kept your head in the game! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Yami fan 12 On: January 26, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please write more I want to know what happens to Yami,Yugi,Bakura and Darcy. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Yami fan 12 On: January 26, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most favorite stories I ever read. I want to know what happens when Yugi sees Yami and is Yugi's girlfriend going to arive at the game shop? I really want to know. PLease don't leave it like this I want to read some more of this it's so darn cool. So pppppppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write some more. |
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