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Reviewed By: DJ On: March 21, 2003 08:35 CST
Comment/Review:
It looks like things are heating up big time! I'm so glad you updated! It was surprising to see that Tea still believed in Yugi very much. It makes you think about how loyal and good friends are, especially in Yugi's case. Now, the moment of truth is here! Will Yugi and the others defeat Pegasus and Yami Bakura? Or will the evil tree in Yugi's heart and soul be the key factor that gets everybody killed? Also, will Yugi save Darcy in time? I have questions, and you hold the answer! Thanks again for the update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 20, 2003 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see that you updated, and the latest chapter was sweet, all the way! It looks like Yugi and the others have a big battle ahead of them! I wish Yugi the best of luck, and it was cool to see that Tea still belived in him! I feel sorry for Yugi, and I hope he pulls through soon. Thanks again for the update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Yugii and Yami fan 12 On: March 19, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank You for updating! I hope Yugi and Darcy get back together. Please update soon too and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Yugi and Yami fan12 On: February 12, 2003 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a cool story so far. What happens in the game shop. I want to know how Yugi and Yami are doing. Keep it up and please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 31, 2003 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello. This is getting very interesting and good! I'm glad you kept your head in the game. I knew that you would do well! I hope you write the next chapter and post it up soon! The other reviewers like your story as well. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 28, 2003 18:56 CST
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This story keeps getting more better with every chapter! I know that this will turn out extremely good! I'm glad to that you kept your head in the game! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Yami fan 12 On: January 26, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please write more I want to know what happens to Yami,Yugi,Bakura and Darcy. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Yami fan 12 On: January 26, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most favorite stories I ever read. I want to know what happens when Yugi sees Yami and is Yugi's girlfriend going to arive at the game shop? I really want to know. PLease don't leave it like this I want to read some more of this it's so darn cool. So pppppppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write some more. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 23, 2003 09:03 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is coming along great! I know this will be a big hit when its all said and done! Anyway, I wish Darcy and Yugi the best of luck with each other. Heaven knows that they will need each other when they all go up against Pegasus! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY!!!! Yugis home!!!!
Yugi: R me and Yami going 2 die?
Of course not. Ur 2 cute 2 kill
Yugi: ^_^
*wispers to lastdj 7701* Hee wont die will he? |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 22, 2003 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the latest chapter, and it is good! I hope any of my suggestions helped you. Anyway, I hope you continue this cool story! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need more.... *Begs at feet* i'm gonna die if ya don't finnish dis fic!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 13, 2003 11:28 CST
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Me again. I really hope that you are writing the next chapter. Everyone is waiting to see on what happens next! Myself included! Anyway, I know its going to be good! Just one thing, keep Darcy and Yugi together. And also, let Yugi explain on why he exploded those years ago. I'm sure it would shed some light for Yugi's old friends. Anyway, keep it up!
(P.S: This is just wishful thinking on my part, but it would be really cool to see Darcy and Tea go into a catfight over Yugi. Its like this: Tea really doesn't love Yami, but she loves Yugi. She's only sorry that she didn't tell him sooner, and does anything in her power to get him back. Unfortunatly for her, Yugi is faithful and loyal to Darcy. That's when things get interesting! Like I said, its wishful thinking. Its up to you.) |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 13, 2003 11:28 CST
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Me again. I really hope that you are writing the next chapter. Everyone is waiting to see on what happens next! Myself included! Anyway, I know its going to be good! Just one thing, keep Darcy and Yugi together. And also, let Yugi explain on why he exploded those years ago. I'm sure it would shed some light for Yugi's old friends. Anyway, keep it up!
(P.S: This is just wishful thinking on my part, but it would be really cool to see Darcy and Tea go into a catfight over Yugi. Its like this: Tea really doesn't love Yami, but she loves Yugi. She's only sorry that she didn't tell him sooner, and does anything in her power to get him back. Unfortunatly for her, Yugi is faithful and loyal to Darcy. That's when things get interesting! Like I said, its wishful thinking. Its up to you. |
Reviewed By: ???? On: January 11, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good fanfict! Write more soon, PLEASE!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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