| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chiaki Nozomi On: December 27, 2002 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wow, wow! I really enjoyed this fanfic; it's the best alt. uni. I've come across so far! I adored the universe you made and Inuyasha's character, so please please, add more! I'll definately read the sequel! |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*from the title* what the hell is up with Yash and the hoe in the motel and it better be Kikyo cuz that would suite her. And she better not come between Yash and Kagome. And also if Inuyasha says Kagome is his mate WHY is he letting that bitchfuck him. Gods, I'm going insame I love this fic soooooo much!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Icefyre On: December 15, 2002 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really inspiring story that made me see the characters in a new way! I especially liked the shower scene! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is getting better and better. But hey whats up with chapters 5 and 6 cuz their not working!!!! Please make them work soon, i can't get enough.
~luv ya~
P.S. i sequel would be the best! |
Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: December 15, 2002 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Very well-plotted and engrossing. But the thing with Kikyo was very confusing - you didn't really explore the possibilities enough. Oh, well, write the sequel soon! Maybe there you can explain about everyone's favorite miko. Or, my favorite miko, anyhow... |
Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: December 15, 2002 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Very well-plotted and engrossing. But the thing with Kikyo was very confusing - you didn't really explore the possibilities enough. Oh, well, write the sequel soon! Maybe there you can explain about everyone's favorite miko. Or, my favorite miko, anyhow... |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Sit,I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome. the last chapter was so good. i expeciall like Inuyasha's T-shirt - "I wasn't Born stupid - It was a gift" but here's the thing. i think he WAS born stupid. oh well. i LOVE this story. |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: December 14, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading your other fics, namely the RK fics, and was pleasantly surprised to discover that you also wrote Inuyasha fics. This was such a captivating story from start to finish. I would find myself checking if there was an update or not. The plot itself was very original and as much as possible you stayed true to the characters and even enhanced their persona. Now that the end has arrived for this fic I find myself longing for more. I think you mentioned that there would be a part two to this fic. I think that would be a good idea so that all the loose ends of the story would be answered. I wouldn't mind reading more about Inuyasha and Kagaome; Sango and Miroku; and the fate of Kikyo. So I hope to read more from you!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Finally! I've waited so long. That was a great ending to a great story. I'm very glad that Kagome finally decided to accept Inuyasha as mate. I'm a little bit confused about the Kikyo part. Did Inuyasha and Kikyo have a history together? Hehe, Inuyasha is going to kill Miroku for doing that in his Jag. Anyway, I can't wait to see I'll Have A Lemonade Too. |
Reviewed By: Angelstars On: December 14, 2002 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! I've been waiting for the ending ever since i read it on IDreams *glomps* can't wait for the sequel!!!! i really wanna see the reaction about the Jag foreplay man...i never laughed so hard thinking he was going to kill them *chuckles* ohhh i can't wait more more more! Sequel is definitely in order! |
Reviewed By: ChiChi On: December 14, 2002 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! |
Reviewed By: BithaBlu On: December 14, 2002 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man... I love this story. I've been waiting for a long time to read the last chapter but I now I want to read more. Normally I don't enjoy the soap-opera-like quality of most ongoing fics but *damn* I want to find out what happens with Kikyo (the whole history of why she's undead), I want to hear about Sango and Miroku's wedding (will Kagome be showing? Will they fuck in the confessional booth before? After? Under the table holding the cake at the reception?) Will Yash kill Miroku for funkifing up his jag? Oh yeah- and what's going to happen with Kagome and Inuyasha?
So yeah- now I'm waiting around for the sequel.
As for the rating: This is the best A/U fic I've read. That includes all the other genres of fics (Evo, Gundam, Vampire Hunter, ect...) the I've read. |
Reviewed By: Kyatto On: December 14, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and highly enjoyable! I like how there is an actual story behind the characters and you describe character interaction very well. Shippo's sit-back-and-enjoy attitude is vastly amusing! |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No!!!! You have to post the next chapter soon. Kagome is gonna so fucking kill him. I LUV the ff!!! |
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