| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Sit,I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Eikos Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome. the last chapter was so good. i expeciall like Inuyasha's T-shirt - "I wasn't Born stupid - It was a gift" but here's the thing. i think he WAS born stupid. oh well. i LOVE this story. |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: December 14, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading your other fics, namely the RK fics, and was pleasantly surprised to discover that you also wrote Inuyasha fics. This was such a captivating story from start to finish. I would find myself checking if there was an update or not. The plot itself was very original and as much as possible you stayed true to the characters and even enhanced their persona. Now that the end has arrived for this fic I find myself longing for more. I think you mentioned that there would be a part two to this fic. I think that would be a good idea so that all the loose ends of the story would be answered. I wouldn't mind reading more about Inuyasha and Kagaome; Sango and Miroku; and the fate of Kikyo. So I hope to read more from you!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Finally! I've waited so long. That was a great ending to a great story. I'm very glad that Kagome finally decided to accept Inuyasha as mate. I'm a little bit confused about the Kikyo part. Did Inuyasha and Kikyo have a history together? Hehe, Inuyasha is going to kill Miroku for doing that in his Jag. Anyway, I can't wait to see I'll Have A Lemonade Too. |
Reviewed By: Angelstars On: December 14, 2002 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! I've been waiting for the ending ever since i read it on IDreams *glomps* can't wait for the sequel!!!! i really wanna see the reaction about the Jag foreplay man...i never laughed so hard thinking he was going to kill them *chuckles* ohhh i can't wait more more more! Sequel is definitely in order! |
Reviewed By: ChiChi On: December 14, 2002 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! |
Reviewed By: BithaBlu On: December 14, 2002 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man... I love this story. I've been waiting for a long time to read the last chapter but I now I want to read more. Normally I don't enjoy the soap-opera-like quality of most ongoing fics but *damn* I want to find out what happens with Kikyo (the whole history of why she's undead), I want to hear about Sango and Miroku's wedding (will Kagome be showing? Will they fuck in the confessional booth before? After? Under the table holding the cake at the reception?) Will Yash kill Miroku for funkifing up his jag? Oh yeah- and what's going to happen with Kagome and Inuyasha?
So yeah- now I'm waiting around for the sequel.
As for the rating: This is the best A/U fic I've read. That includes all the other genres of fics (Evo, Gundam, Vampire Hunter, ect...) the I've read. |
Reviewed By: Kyatto On: December 14, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and highly enjoyable! I like how there is an actual story behind the characters and you describe character interaction very well. Shippo's sit-back-and-enjoy attitude is vastly amusing! |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No!!!! You have to post the next chapter soon. Kagome is gonna so fucking kill him. I LUV the ff!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh wow! this is very good. i like how you're writing this. i hope you update really soon. my one but of advice to you is unless you plan to do something later in the story that require inuyasha and kagome being hard set together, make the finalizing of their relationship (moving in, her coming to terms witht he pregnancy, etc) take a while. if you resolve the conflict between inu and kag before you resolve the main conflict of solving the murder it may not be as good as it could be. that fact that you've got two whole (very interesting) plots going on is excellent. i'll be checking daily for updates so please don't disappoint me by making me wait too long! ^_^
Mara |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
lmao! krista allouva!!! what a name..or maybe it's just me who thinks it's funny!!! |
Reviewed By: Syethemano On: December 13, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest Inu/Kag fics I've ever read! Honestly! An it's an AU! Ohhh, I hope Kagome doesn't get too angry with Inu Yasha though. |
Reviewed By: Vixen On: December 13, 2002 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool and very original. I read your other 3 chapters on iridescent dreams and encourage you to put more up soon! I'm addicted :). |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More more more!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: spazmo On: January 03, 2003 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really one of the best IY fics I've read. I am excited about the sequel.
My one beef is that the Naraku and Kikyo involvement was explored rather minimally, though the BDSM angle was inspired. Can I hope that Sesshoumaru will appear in the sequel? I love that guy. Thanks for writing an AU story that includes gritty details and isn't just a high-school romance fic! |
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