| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: bKatty On: January 15, 2005 13:58 CST
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this is the greatest AU Inuyasha story ever! (i read it twice ^_^) **crosses fingers** i hope theres a sequel!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 14:17 CST
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awesome.. that was just to good..
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 01, 2004 02:22 CST
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hey what just one momint what a bout the baby and Songo and Moroku did they have kids detals people detals
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 18, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOO!!!! THAT WAS PRETTY F*****G AWESOME! Seriously, this is so awesome.. i hope the sequel will be finished soon!
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Reviewed By: Laydhwk On: July 16, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very well done! Enjoyed immensely. Such emotion, and detail. Please, continue to keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 05, 2003 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird, yet likable. The whole future yet past setting works. And my favorite pairing is Naraku/Kikyou. They're so perfect for each other, don't you think?(HeHe) Any who, liked it and I especially liked the title.(very funny) The only turn off(pun intended) was the "doggie style" mating. I know Inu Yasha is a dog demon but, give me a break! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 26, 2003 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is by far one of the best fan fics I have ever read, and it's an AU to boot! I was so blown away. I love the relationship you gave Kagome and Inu Yasha. I also like the way Sango and Inu Yasha kept insulting each other. All the terminology was creative, and I love the fact that the characters explained them too. I haven't been this excited about a story since I read Chris-san's Beauty & The Beast Inu Yasha style. And I am soooo ready to read the rest of the sequel: Lemonade, Too.
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Reviewed By: Prae On: June 12, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I like your work.
You're good at writing attitude, Inuyasha-style. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Just what I needed: an old favorite. I still don't get the joke about speaking another language, but I think I finally understand the insurance scam this time around. What I don't get is what Kikyou would care about money (even that much money) and how that was supposed to help Naraku find the Shikon no Tama. |
Reviewed By: miyo On: February 15, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was vary kickass please write the sequel &_& |
Reviewed By: Anna (nu_chan@hotmail.com) On: February 10, 2003 20:35 CST
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Okay, I know it took me a long time, but I finally got to read this story. I read it about two weeks ago at Iridescent Dreams, but I couln't leave a review there, so... here it is! I love this story, so much. You have no idea. It is just so great. Great plot, great characterization, just great writing. You're so awesome! ^_^ I'll be reading Lemonade Too, as soon as I get some free time, and I seem to remember you mentioning a 'end of series fic'? I can't wait for that! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 13, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another monster from the I.D.! I also read this one a long time ago on Iridescent Dreams, and I'd like to say that it's one of the ones I keep coming back to.
This version of Inuyasha seems a lot more collected than the canon one, but I could see how it could be him -- he's supposed to be older, more like a human just south of thirty than a human at 16 or 17 like in the anime/manga. It's hard to picture Kagome as being from Wisconsin, but this older version of Shippo makes so much sense! Oh and Kaede's, "Did I mention he's an idiot?"
Overall -- I found it funny and insightful. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:42 CST
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so when's this supposed sequel coming out, hn?
Mara |
Reviewed By: Mariam On: January 22, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't beleive it is she pregnant?!?!?!?!?!?! i hope you tell us soon, i think he should have told her that she would be pregnant well any way i looooooved it!!!!!!! |
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