| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no you stoped augh I was getting into that really bad lol this is good keep it up |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 10:53 PST
Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha, poor Yamcha, Not. Good Fic, keep writing. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 16, 2003 03:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Sorry, but I can't help but laugh at that review. Geez, some people are never happy. When we write Bulma as sweet and innocent we get nailed for making her a victim. When we write her the way you have we get nailed on making her a slut.
HELLO!!! It's fan FICTION people. Don't take it so damn seriously! |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: February 07, 2003 12:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is the first time I've reviewed your fic and I'm sorry I hadn't done it sooner. I know how it is to crave reviews and not get...it makes for a very sad state of mind.
anyway, your fic is great. I love the idea of the DBZ crew working in a video store, very original. too bad Yamcha got the 'cooties'. oh well, that's what happens when you screw around and behave irresponsibly. the jock itch commercial was also a grade 'A' prime scene.
it's funny how although goku always get on Vegeta's nerves they always get stuck together. I guess that's Vegeta's punishment for be such an asshole all the time. I like the realistic situation of living check to check, starving while waiting for you neck paycheck so you can eat and just making do with oodles of noodles until you do. I know i've done it. Too bad I couldn't just go to a grocery store and fly off with a shopping cart of food then.
does Bulma have to smoke? i know she's stressed, but the sex should be taking care of that. or maybe she can just go eat some chocolate? sorry, i'm constantly trying to get everyone to stop smoking....
okay, well keep up the good job. i'll try to leave a review for all upcoming chapters.
later! |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
