| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPPPPDATEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
IM BEEEGING U CANT TAKE IT !! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 01:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^^
The scence in the washing machine place with Vegeta and that kid was cute ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 17:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like the chapy ok Update soon!!!
I wanna know what happens at the club
Later !
Give me more Lemon! >:D |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 10:20 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, you want reviews and I just dont know what to say! The story is good, what else could i say?? lol. That stalker chick was a nice little touch in the Yamcha-cheating-on-Bulma thing. Hmm...off to read more! |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 10:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow, Im sorry I havent reviewed more on this fic. Thats so uncharacteristic of me *sweatdrop* Its just that I got caught up in it because it was so good. Ive never heard of the Z team working in a video store, lol, its a cool change of scenery. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 14:31 PST
Comment/Review:
I remembered another thing.
If you really want to argue about Bulma's character, check out either the uncut Japanese version or the manga. She was going to let Goku feel her ass for his dragonball and actually flashed Roshi for his, although she did think she had underwear on. Unfortunately she did not, and showed him everything. Hmm, I think I wrote her pretty much in character.
Now, I'm completely done. No more defending my story. Hee hee. *slides soap box back into closet until next time* |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 13:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Heh heh. I must be doing pretty good if someone took the time to flame me! My first one. I'm not sure why I'm happy about this, but I am. Maybe it's that lover of chaos thing, I dunno.
Okay now to my comments.
You don't like it, that's fine. Everyone has different tastes. I understand this. The only part of all of this that upsets me is the fact that you think Bulma is a whore. *shakes head at your ignorance* The very reason stupid stereotypes like this exist is because of people like you still hold on to them. Bulma is a strong, independent woman who is not afraid to take what she wants in life. I have tried my best to make her as realistic as possible here. Yes, she was conflicted about Yamcha. Yes, she cheated on him. Yes, she regretted it, for a while. Not everything is as black and white as they try to make out in psychology class.
As far as the rest of it goes, well yes my fic is quite trashy. Lot's of hentai. If you don't like those things, don't read it. I'm not your mama. I can't slap your hand if you don't heed every warning I've put on every chapter containing these situations.
Two last thoughts and then I'm done.
1. It's FICTION as in not real and not to be taken so seriously.
2. Never say never. My husband and I are a testament to the impossible.
:) Thanks for your opinion. |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. On: March 05, 2003 12:59 PST
Comment/Review:
I can't say I liked this fic, because it's like wrong. I mean, people think now a days, that they Bulma and Vegeta can end up any kind of way. Just because they're a real couple, doesn't mean that people have to make them cheat on Yamcha or anyone to get together. Because those relationships in real life, like that never work out, because if Bulma will cheat on Yamcha with Vegeta, chances are she'll cheat on Vegeta too. That's just wrong, no wander people portray Bulma as a whore now, because that's how people are making her in fics now. Even, I, who was started out as the BIGGEST Bulma/Vegeta fan am literly, almost out of love for the couple now, because of all the trashy fics floating around like this. You wanted a review, you've got one. You may not like it, but at least I keep it real. Wanna holla? TheDiamondMami@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 05:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am down right ashamed of myself. I've been following this fic since the beginning but I have never reviewed.
I love it! Please continue soon...it's an incredible story! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love this fic yup yup!!!!!
*BULMA U little minx!!!! Come here sis!!!*
OY! why do I have to put up with this!!!
*cause im your sycho self I say what u r afraid to say!*
Ahem! enough bout me well keep up the good work and please update soon !!!!!
*LEMON MOOORE LEMONNNNNNNNN!!!!*
Later >:D |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I can't wait to see more |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 12:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool great chap. keep up the god work |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 03:32 PST
Comment/Review:
yay!! I luv this fic!! Please update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Kat On: May 04, 2003 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you continuing the story. Very well planned cliffhanger, mean [B(], but well planned *lol*. You can make it up to you fans by bringing out the nect chapter soon :) |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:58 PST
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I love this story! *Holds out a plate with 'DBZ' written across it* More please!!!!!!! |
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