| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 17:57 PST
Comment/Review:
Wowie! It like blew me away!...Oops! 0_o I spoke too soon!...*gets blown away by a tornado*
*twitch* Ouchie! *twitch* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah that was a great chapter keep it up |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed my ass off! And the last part was soooo damn sexy! Loved It! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Piccolo drunk that is a hoot. Oh and the religiuos fantics that was good too. keep it up. this is good. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 22:53 PST
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Yea!!! You updated! I have been waiting for it for a while. I can't wait until the next one is posted. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 21, 2002 08:16 PST
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Hehehe. That part about Vegeta pushing Krillin off the counter was funny. I could see him doing something like that for no reason. *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 21, 2002 07:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh cool story, i like it a lot, update a.s.a.p
kk? great lemons |
Reviewed By: wecbear@aol.com On: December 20, 2002 21:10 PST
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Loved the humor, Veggie and Goku at the supermarket was great. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 20, 2002 19:30 PST
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This is just getting better and better. You have to keep this up. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 20, 2002 05:37 PST
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Was actually prety funny. You should continue |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, heres the review, where's my cookie? Just kidding :-p Anyway, I think it's really great so far, so just keep writing, because I like this, even if the other dumbasses her don't. No offense to anybody or anything, oh hell, never mind, take all the ofense you want from that remark. Not like I really care, I've had to take tests all day. Back to the revuew..... More Yamcha bashing!!!!! Then I love you forever and ever! Well, umm, not really, but I'll keep reading and reviewing.....
Ja ne~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no you stoped augh I was getting into that really bad lol this is good keep it up |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 10:53 PST
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Ha ha ha, poor Yamcha, Not. Good Fic, keep writing. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 16, 2003 03:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Sorry, but I can't help but laugh at that review. Geez, some people are never happy. When we write Bulma as sweet and innocent we get nailed for making her a victim. When we write her the way you have we get nailed on making her a slut.
HELLO!!! It's fan FICTION people. Don't take it so damn seriously! |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: February 07, 2003 12:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is the first time I've reviewed your fic and I'm sorry I hadn't done it sooner. I know how it is to crave reviews and not get...it makes for a very sad state of mind.
anyway, your fic is great. I love the idea of the DBZ crew working in a video store, very original. too bad Yamcha got the 'cooties'. oh well, that's what happens when you screw around and behave irresponsibly. the jock itch commercial was also a grade 'A' prime scene.
it's funny how although goku always get on Vegeta's nerves they always get stuck together. I guess that's Vegeta's punishment for be such an asshole all the time. I like the realistic situation of living check to check, starving while waiting for you neck paycheck so you can eat and just making do with oodles of noodles until you do. I know i've done it. Too bad I couldn't just go to a grocery store and fly off with a shopping cart of food then.
does Bulma have to smoke? i know she's stressed, but the sex should be taking care of that. or maybe she can just go eat some chocolate? sorry, i'm constantly trying to get everyone to stop smoking....
okay, well keep up the good job. i'll try to leave a review for all upcoming chapters.
later! |
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