| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!1
the shit thing was scary
poor you
did you have to clean it up?? lol
More lemon ^^ CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh Great FIC! I luv it! HEHE Piccolo was pissed of one glass of beer! Please update soon, I like reading this! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:57 PST
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NAY! Keep the name, if just for nostalgics (sp?) :) Again, great chapter you. I was a little dissapointed that there was no lemon, but hey, at least Bulma and Vegeta are cool again :) can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 10:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh you did stop so sudinly but this was great keep going |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 07:55 PST
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ack! you just stopped it so quickly! must write more.. must write more... damnit! its not work! stupid Jedi mind trick NEVER works when its supposed to! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 07:54 PST
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Wow the stuff hit the floor, poor P. I have a feeling that we will be hearing from the next door guy again. |
Reviewed By: Ianjohn On: January 09, 2003 20:05 PST
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Very nice fic. I'm enjoying reading it. I really liked the last chapter when Piccallo got drunk. That one really made me laugh. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 15:18 PST
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So unfair! You gotta keep going with this! I don't think I've ever laughed as much as I did when I read about Piccolo being drunk... God I can just see that.... |
Reviewed By: Gie On: January 09, 2003 13:26 PST
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well, the Texas thing was right, but you have to have the right circumstances...if you owned the land before Texas offically became a state, you were still under the Homestead Act (or something to that extent) which lets landownders shoot trespassers, etc.
Oh, byw..good chapter...Vejiita seemed a little shook up with the Yamucha thingee, ne? *grin* It was Elvis' birthday the other day.... |
Reviewed By: DBZ Girl On: January 09, 2003 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic. I love it!!! Also I live in Texas and yes there is a law that says that if some one trespasses on ur property u have the right to shoot them, not kill just an injury. Also in Fort Worth Texas if u steal a horse u can be hung... It's funny but it's still the law. |
Reviewed By: Kimmy S. On: January 09, 2003 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely review, but I like your story so much that I thought that I would. NICE JOB SO FAR!!! |
Reviewed By: Sam Goody On: January 09, 2003 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleae update soon, I love this story |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 09, 2003 12:30 PST
Comment/Review:
'I have to resort to begging for reviews again, so please, pretty please with sugar and maybe some lemon on top.'
I was just about to close out of the story when I saw that last line. So I thought I would stop and take a minute to fill out a review. I love where your story is going, and despite them havig the jobs that they do, you have fairly kept them in character and I like that. Keep up the good writing and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 11:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great loved it, but you did it again was really into it and it stopped but hey there is another chapter and Ill be waiting for it. |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: January 03, 2003 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another steamy chapter! I really like your story can't wait for the next chapter! Later! |
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