| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sam Goody On: January 09, 2003 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleae update soon, I love this story |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 09, 2003 12:30 PST
Comment/Review:
'I have to resort to begging for reviews again, so please, pretty please with sugar and maybe some lemon on top.'
I was just about to close out of the story when I saw that last line. So I thought I would stop and take a minute to fill out a review. I love where your story is going, and despite them havig the jobs that they do, you have fairly kept them in character and I like that. Keep up the good writing and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 11:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great loved it, but you did it again was really into it and it stopped but hey there is another chapter and Ill be waiting for it. |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: January 03, 2003 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another steamy chapter! I really like your story can't wait for the next chapter! Later! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 17:57 PST
Comment/Review:
Wowie! It like blew me away!...Oops! 0_o I spoke too soon!...*gets blown away by a tornado*
*twitch* Ouchie! *twitch* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah that was a great chapter keep it up |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed my ass off! And the last part was soooo damn sexy! Loved It! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Piccolo drunk that is a hoot. Oh and the religiuos fantics that was good too. keep it up. this is good. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 22:53 PST
Comment/Review:
Yea!!! You updated! I have been waiting for it for a while. I can't wait until the next one is posted. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 21, 2002 08:16 PST
Comment/Review:
Hehehe. That part about Vegeta pushing Krillin off the counter was funny. I could see him doing something like that for no reason. *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 21, 2002 07:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh cool story, i like it a lot, update a.s.a.p
kk? great lemons |
Reviewed By: wecbear@aol.com On: December 20, 2002 21:10 PST
Comment/Review:
Loved the humor, Veggie and Goku at the supermarket was great. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 20, 2002 19:30 PST
Comment/Review:
This is just getting better and better. You have to keep this up. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 20, 2002 05:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Was actually prety funny. You should continue |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 16:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, heres the review, where's my cookie? Just kidding :-p Anyway, I think it's really great so far, so just keep writing, because I like this, even if the other dumbasses her don't. No offense to anybody or anything, oh hell, never mind, take all the ofense you want from that remark. Not like I really care, I've had to take tests all day. Back to the revuew..... More Yamcha bashing!!!!! Then I love you forever and ever! Well, umm, not really, but I'll keep reading and reviewing.....
Ja ne~
*Crazy One* |
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