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 Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2003 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ryou: O.O'

Bakura: uh... Aibou?

Ryou: O.OU...... >().
 Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2003 05:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ryou: O.O'

Bakura: Uh oh...uh Aibou?

Ryou: O.OU...... >().
 Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2003 04:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked the last chapter.

Yugi: YEY!!! I'm going 2 be rescued

Yep. U'll be back in the arms of Yami in no time

Yugi: ^-^

Yami:^_^
 Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2003 04:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked the last chapter.

Yugi: YEY!!! I'm going 2 be rescued

Yep. U'll be back in the arms of Yami in no time

Yugi: ^-^

Yami:^_^
 Reviewed By: Jadesaber  On: January 17, 2003 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked those last two chapters. I hope you can post the longer chapter on Monday. Good luck with your exams and all! I really like this story, it's really original. I haven't seen any others like this before. Please post the next chapter soon! I want to see what happens.
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2003 22:23 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OK I insist this fic keeps on going! I love it! This is the first time I have found a fic that I go back to everyday to see if it has been updated. So please keep on going!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2003 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwww... I thought the Yugi and Seto 'sock' scene was very sweet, also glad to see some BakuraxRyou action, is his nose still broken..

Icz
 Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2003 11:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey u meanie. U cant leave me on a cliffhanger like this

Yugi: Calm down. She'll be continuing it soon

But I want it now *sulks*

Yugi: ^_^;
 Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2003 06:14 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WEEHEEE!!!!! CHOCOLATE!!!! CHOCOLATE!!!! CHOCOLATE EVERYWHERE!!!!! o_0? Ooh sorry... just dwelling in one my all time favourite fantasies. My other one is Yami in the nude... aaaahhhh *drools like Homer Simpson her tongue droop out of her mouth*

Yami: o_0? And what's your worst nightmare?

You turning into a girl with no fashion sense whatsoever. *shudders* Anyway I digress. *starts b*tch slapping the Other* KEEP... YOUR... SLIMY, DIRTY... MITTS.... OFF... OF... YUGI...-CHAN!!!! ELSE I'LL GET MY YUGI MUSE TO CASTRATE YOU AND SHOVE IT UP 'YOUR' BUMHOLE!!!!!!

Yugi: YEAH!!!!! GGGGRRRRRRRRRR!!!! *starts lashing at the Other but is held back from pumelling it's guts by a leash*

Other: O+OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Yami: I thought people are suppose to go insane whenver they look at the Other.

Yeah... but Yugi and I are already extremely insane.... so it's makes no difference.

Yami: Oh... *shrugs*

YAYAYAYAYAY for DM to wake and come to his senses. My Dark Magician muse however needs a little bit more time... *she stares at thin purple clad git*

Dark Magician: *in stupor* I killed him... I killed Little Master...

Celtic Guardian: HOW MANY TIMES!?!?!?!? HIS NOT DEAD!!!!! GET IT INTO YOUR THICK SKULL!!!!!

That won't work CG... *whispers in his ear. CG grins*

CG: BTW I LOVE YOU!!!!

Dark Magician: *snaps out of stupor* What!? *CG lands a Frenchy*

CG: *grins and picks DM, DM yelps. CG carries him to my room and slams and locks the door*

Everyone else: O.OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

I DIDN'T MEAN THAT!!!!!! YOU HENTAI BRAINED ELF!!!!! *sighs then turns to leev* PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
 Reviewed By: RyuArashi  On: January 15, 2003 13:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, you wench!!! How dare you stop the fic at this point???!!! Update as soon as possible,or else....I love this story! Great job!
 Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2003 10:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh ooo ooo.

Yugi: Shes at a loss 4 words

Story.....brillant......more

Yugi: U will pair me and Yami up l8r wont u?
 Reviewed By: Madyamisam  On: January 15, 2003 08:01 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh oo ooo ooo... BTW Do read and review my now FINISHED My Fair Yami ficcy!!!! JA!!!!
PS: CONTINUE... AND WHOOP THAT ONE EYED HIPPYS JACK@$$ BACK TO THE BIG DARK AND UGLY CORNERS OF THE COSMOS!!!!! OO AND SEND THAT OTHER TO KEEP HIM COMPANY. HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA!!!!! HUMPING HUMPING HUMPING!!!! WOOO!!!! RIDE 'EM COW GIRL!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *running around like a headless chicken*
*********************WARNING************** WARNING WARNING SUGAR OVERLOAD. SELF DETONATION IN 5...4...3...2...1.... HAVE A NICE DAY
*Sam who's still running like a headless chicken who's head explodes thus you get... a headless Sam*
YGO cast: O.OU *then faints* @.@
*Sam pops her head out then looks at the gang* That my dear leev-chan is called the turtle neck technique... Use it well if you want to scare the s*** out of people... ^_________________^
 Reviewed By: Madyamisam  On: January 15, 2003 07:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Bakura: I almost died from the BATH of DEATH!!!!!
Hehe... *pulls out a huge bathtub and nogs him on the head continuously* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
BANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANG
Ryou: *in tears* NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! you''ll kill him!!!!
Bakura: @.@
He's already dead Ryou... I mean he is 3000 years old... or is it 5000? o_0?..... @_@
Ryou:*stops crying* o_0?... oh... ok... carry on then... ^_______^....
Bakura: I hate my hikari...
No you don't . You LOVE him!!!!
Bakura: I do not!!!!!!!
Do
Bakura: Don't
Do
Bakura: Don't
Do
B:Don't
Do
B:Don't
Do
Ryou: *taps his feet impatiently*
B: DON'T
DO
B:DON'T
DO!!
B: DON.... *gets interrupted by a big Frenchy from Ryou*
^________________________^ DO YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!! I WIN I WIN!!!!!
B: *blushes so hard his hair spontaneously combusts*
-_-' *takes out hose pipe and puts out the fire on the hot headed B*
Do continue leev-chan... I hope your muses don't spontaneously combust because they blush to hard...
Bakura: @.@
 Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2003 23:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, the plot thickens! Loving this story!
 Reviewed By: little_demeter  On: January 14, 2003 21:49 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SO COOL NEVER READ A STORY LIKE THIS FOR A LONG TIME.^_^ALSO I WAS WONDERING CAN YOU MAKE A SEQUAL TO THEW STORY.BY THE WAY I THINK YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER.*/GETS DISTACTED BY ELECTRA*GOTTA GO BYE.*IN BAACKROUND*GIVE ME BACK MY CHOCOLATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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