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Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 14, 2003 19:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter. That was really clever how Kaiba got his message out, though I'm surprised that Joey is the one who figured it out. I hope you can post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: daftdaydream On: January 10, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tehe brilliant so far, cant wait to read next Chapter (when it gets written **teasing*).
Im glad to see someones mind is as twisted as mine (see a few of these though on these fan fic sites).
1. I think Yami is brilliant neway and u did him justice in this.
2. Bakura has made me laugh really loud (even though i have seen him in the series (damm parents hogging TV)and get my elders worried by Contiunally laffing for last 3 hours:P:P
3. **Crosses fingers for YamiXYugi** |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
o_0? Did Yugi just kick Seto in the nuts? *checks your Seto muse and finds him with an ice pack on his crotch* ^()^ YAY!!!!
Everyone else except my Seto muse: #CELEBRATE GOOD TIMES!!!! COME ON!!!!!
leev's Seto Muse: *high pitch voice* Can I have a glass of water please?
My Seto muse: I feel real sorry for you mate. *hands him a glass of water*
MORE NUT KICKING!!!!!! MORE NUT KICKING!!!! Oh yeah I was wondering...
Yami: CAN WE HAVE MORE NUT KICKING!?!?!?!?!?
YAY!!!!!!!
My Seto muse: Couldn't you cut some slack?
Everyone else: o_0? *consults with the others*..............*they turn back to him* NO!!!!
Hmm... I wonder leev do you think I could borrow your kicking Seto in the nuts idea for my future ficcys?
Seto: O_O' *thinking* I think I may need to raise my health insurance....
MUWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! NUT KICKING NUT KICKING!!!! WEEEEHEEEE!!!!!!!
Seto: T_T I'll make an appointment with the funeral services too.
PLZ DO CONTINUE MUWHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Seto: *Seto starting to write his will* |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I understand the story
Yugi: No u dont
Do so but I stll want u 2 continue so I can check 2 see if my uhhh hunches r correct
Yugi: See!!!! Ur admitting u have no idea wat happens next
Yugi?
Yugi: Yes
Shut up |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 01:06 CST
Comment/Review:
That did clear up a few things, thanks. This story is getting more interesting. I hope they can save Yugi and that he won't be too tramatized by everything. Are he and Yami going to get together? And what about Seto? Please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* That was brillant
Yugi: I argree
*faints with joy*
Yugi: ^_^; |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome! I vote Y/Y |
Reviewed By: Lily On: January 08, 2003 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang. FF.net's broken. *sniff*
But anyways, good chapter (as usual).
I do have to wonder, though, how does Pegasus expect Kaiba to do all that stuff asked of him? :-/
Of course, maybe I'm just slow, but... ^^;
Uhh... wait, how do I submit this review? --;
*is not used to mediaminer*
OH! Found the button! ^^; Might help if I pressed "submit", ne? |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 10:53 CST
Comment/Review:
*still trying to snap Yugi out of it*
Yami: *to Pegasus* Can't you knock some sense into him!?!? It was YOUR fault after all.
Pegasus: OH KNOCK THIS!!!! *hammers him with one of Sam's massive mallet. Joey pushes pass*
BANG!!!!
Joey: YUG!!! YUG!!! *grabs him and plonks him in front of the computer* YA DIDN'T GIT RAPED 'K? SEE!?!?
Yugi: *reads the fic and snaps out of it* Phew...
Yami: @()@....
OI!!!!! *grabs mallet and hammers Pegasus* DON'T YOU DARE TAKE MY STUFF!!!!!! *hammers him continuingly*
BANG BANG BANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANGBANG...
Mai: NOW LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE!!! You can't call him a one eyed geriatric hippy anymore...
Sam: o_0? *looks at Pegasus* Hmm... well I'll just say his a red and white pancake with a hole in the middle...
Mai: Whatever...
Yugi: The geriatric hippy's gone...
^()^ YAY!!!!
Yugi: But I still see dead people...
-_-... o_O? Wait... Yami's dead so is Bakura...
Yugi: ^______^ Exactly...
-_-'
Yami: *comes to and looks at himself* AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
WHAT NOW!?!?!?!?
Yami: *comes waddling in one foot shorter in tears* I'm a midget....
O_O'... ^_____^ Well look on the bright side...
Yami: What's that?
^()^ You and Yugi can now be classed as twins!!!!!
Weehee!!!!
Yami: -_-'
Do continue it gives me a chance to make more fun of my muses!!!! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 23:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This just keeps surprising (this reader) and entertaining. Good work! |
Reviewed By: Ms. Prongs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, the more I read this the weirder I get...
I mean, wow...
Strong, uh description?
*Blinks and fights back the strong urge to apologize*
Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter...just don't get too descriptive, kay? *laughs*
Sorry, couldn't help it. I wouldn't ask you to hold back any creative talents, I'm just a bloody prude.
Anyyywayssss
Another brilliant chapter, and as always, keep up the great work!
(Oh, and thanks for the little nod there ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!
Yami: OH MY GOD!!!
Seto: OH THANK GOD!!!! *Yami maims him* Ack... urgh...
Yugi: *traumatised shocked* O.O'
Ryou: What is it? *reads fic* OH MY GOD!!!!
Bakura: hehe...
Joey and Tristan: OH MY GOD!!!!
Tea: *still reading*
She needs to take longer to process in her thick skull... so while she's reading. I demand you to continue... why you ask? *grabs shocked Yugi*
YOU JUST TRAMATISED MY YUGI MUSE AND NOW HE CAN'T CARRY ON WITH MY FICS!!!!!!
Yami: CONTINUE!!!!! *holds up a very long bowie knife* ELSE I'LL CUT YOU UP SO GOOD THAT THE WORMS WON'T HAVE TO CHEW!!!! *Yugi tugs on his shirt* Yes aibou?
Yugi: *whispers* I see dead people...
Everyone else: O_O'
Yugi: And geriatric hippies...
Everone else: O()OU
Tea: OH MY GOD!!!!!
Everone else: -_-' |
Reviewed By: pikazoom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original...and it's well written...poor Yugi...he's in the middle of all the problems |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi! That description of the sacrifice was really disgusting and graphic, but you did warn us. Anyway, I hope Yami and Yami Bakura get there in time. And why does Pegasus want Kaiba to rape Yugi? Please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeeowch! Jesus Christ! Me thinks Peggy been watching too much La Blue Girl and Legend of the Overfiend.
I don't think Seto reacted the way he should, if someone told me they planned to do /that/ to someone I loved I would've killed them with a plastic spork.
And Seto just can't ask Yugi to let him boff him so he doesn't die?
Icz who is so looking forward to a Pegasus ass-kicking. |
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