| "Dreams Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Child of Earendil On: November 27, 2003 10:15 CST
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Graces of the Valar. I don't know if you meant to do it, but your OC is one of the most dire Mary-Sues I've ever seen. Please do not take offense, but it's true. All the symptoms are there: extraordinary beauty, she calls Kaiba-san "Seto" when she first sees him, she's "better than Yuugi" at dueling - yawning as she beat Kaiba? No one disrespects my beloved that way...I'm really sorry. Maybe you did it on purpose. But as a fellow writer, I had to tell the truth. But please, PLEASE know that I mean no offense, and this is NOT meant as a flame.
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Reviewed By: Steffie On: July 18, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good "romance" scene. I don't know why you didn't write you own when you used to role play in The Blazing Fires Town of Gold. You are a great writer and I have always admired your work. You will be famous some day and I just can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
Reviewed By: L4 spce colony [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you r my favorite writer in the whole world. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 15:16 CDT
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You took so long to write such a short chapter! Grr... but I know you've been busy. Oh, and I'm ecstatic over the mention of myself!!! All I can say is you'd BETTER have some sequel-gears already turning in your head (hah, that sounds weird) or I'll be hounding you! lol, keep it up, I'm sure I'll talk to you. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 23, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesomoli chapter! But now I is so sad that there's only one more chapter...waah!
Maybe, for all of us, you can write another story? |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 14:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
All I've got to say is you better write quick! I'm practically addicted to your story; I have to see what they're going to say! You are too cruel to always leave us hanging like this. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 10:24 CDT
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Evil cliffhanger! No! I did not expect to come back to such a frustrating chapter! grr... It was very good though, I'll give you points for that...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 18, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally wrote more after a WHOLE WEEK of not writing! *shakes finger* I don't ever want you to do that again, y'hea? *is kidding*
I want to know what happens so post more! |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 15, 2003 20:28 CDT
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I'm waiting patiently for the ending of the story. I must know what's going on with Kaiba and Mina. Please, I want to see what's up. (pulls a Wayne from Saving Silverman) C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, :-( C'mon, C'mon, C'MON!! lol :-) |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 10, 2003 22:31 CDT
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O.O' (in shock) one word, whoa.
I have to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 18:17 CDT
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Wahhh! *sniff* Poor Mina! It's--it's sooo sad! Wahhhh! ... Ok I'm done!*perky* Ok now ya have ta write more soon! k? ^_^0 |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 10, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree! You are the devil! But that's okay, because you are a brilliant writer and you need to post more. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 14:11 CDT
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Princess Yuy, you are the DEVIL! great chapter btw |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:26 CDT
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Please update! I've been thinking about it all day! And I know that sounds really lame, but I NEED to read! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:11 CDT
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Ok, your last update was April 3rd, and the one before that was three days previous to that, including the 3rd. In that, you stated you were making your deadlines... so does that mean your deadlines are every three days? If they are, YOU'RE LATE! Today is the 7TH, FOUR days after. We really want to read! |
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