| "Dreams Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 07, 2003 01:10 CDT
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Keep gooooooooooing. It's getting gooooooooood. :-) |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 20:28 CDT
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Ok, my last post was in the morning, so you've had ALL day to update...and you didn't! You're really bugging us readers... but we love you anyway! ^_^ (k, i hope that was enough sucking up) MORE! |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 13:30 CDT
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you've got to be kidding me!!! You can leave me hangin' like that!!!! Oh you're soo mean!!! *sniff* N E ways plez write more soon! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 16:39 CST
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Come on, write more! If it takes you this long to write with just Nazgirl hounding, hopefully you'll go faster with two!
More! please...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"m just so into this story and i want more!!! Update asap! |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 04, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter! It might even be my favorite of them all!
I don't need to say MORE anyMORE because you already know I want MORE!
(more) |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 14:23 CST
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good chapter.. Pegasus is so manipulative, it's scary. Why didn't the others take shelter with Joey and Mina? More more! |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: March 31, 2003 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes open so wide they pop out and roll everywhere, making people who get queasy at that kind of thing scream for bloody murder and run around* Why thankies for appreciating hounding.
What am I supposed to do, anyway? Not hound?! I don't think so!
Great chappie btw. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:49 CST
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GREAT chapter! but now I really really want to know what she plans to do with that ring... |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:42 CST
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I know! In the last chapter, he knows that Pegasus is her dad! I thought maybe I accidentally skipped that *little* piece of information or something...I was confused... and he wasn't making a big deal... lol K, I'll read the new chapter now.
I think I can speak for all of us when I say that 12 DAYS IS WAY TOO LONG TO WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: March 31, 2003 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you post more since we're all dying here to find out what happens next?
;-P |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: March 22, 2003 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up, it's getting better. ;) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: March 21, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the Story alot please update it please. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 15:08 CST
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The chasm between them? that doesn't sound too good... ugh, why does it take you so long to write! another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: March 20, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter! More please! |
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