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Title: i wish
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do wish you'd finish this. *sigh* It really is wonderful and I was enjoying it so much until I went to get to the next part of day three and it didn't exist. That just kind of ruined my happy mood. D: You're very talented and this story is wonderful adn I think you should continue it as soon as you can. I know writer's block sucks and I hope that's all it is but it has been a few YEARS lol.
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Title: I Found You Again
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mean to be unfair to kichi, I give her kudos for trying, but she just does not have your writing talent. In fact, very, very few writers of adult anime fanfiction have your talent! I remember when I first read this story on your (now defunct?) site fanfiction central. Only wish you could've had it in you to finish it (sigh). But I know, writers block is a bitch, I have it also. Hey, but maybe someday you may try again (please?)
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it. SO was that dream of Kags like a vision of the future or somthing? Anyway its good. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I am curious as to why you gave such a wonderful story to someone who has never written in the Inuyasha fandom before. She doesn't seem to really know Inuyasha or how the characters act, and compared to you, she couldn't write herself out of paper bag. It's really a shame that you are letting her ruin it.
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Reviewed By: ashie d [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Way You've Wrote This Story. I Really Wish That You Would Continue It Becuase I Honestly Don't Like The Way The Other Person Has Wrote The Story. So, Please Think Of Continuing The Story Yourself. I Know That A Lot Of The Other People Feel The Same Way
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. You have a wonderful writing talent and an excellent knowledge of the Inuyasha characters. You've captured their characterizations perfectly. Your grammar and spelling is superb. I just read the next chapter (written by someone else) and I was quite disappointed with the quality of the writing and the characterizations. I'm sorry to see that you will not be finishing this story, because unless you finish it, it will remain unfinished for me.
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Reviewed By: inu_gurl On: August 08, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and write more! Can you e-mail me when you get more written and give me the website and info for in case I forget? inu_kagome_kawaii@yahoo.com THANKS!
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Title: ¬.¬
Reviewed By: InuAngel788 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CMON!! you gotta update! ive been waiting so long!! its a great story! i really dont see why you dont wanna continue it anymore! if i had a story THIS good i dont think id ever let it end this terribly. At least TRY to add a new chapter to it! I kno im not the only person who feels this way. Your a great author and i appreciate your writing which is why i dont want you to stop this story! i LOVE inuyasha and its definitely THE best inu/kag fic ive ever read. I jus cant stand seeing it die like this knowing how great its goin. PLZ for the love of me and all your fans! DONT END IT THIS WAY!! PLZ KEEP IT GOIN!! THIS STORY COULD ONLY GET BETTER UNDER UR HANDS ALONE!! i dont even want it continued by another person! it wouldnt b the same! i know it wouldnt! plz pareathe! even if its jus a chapter every month or wutever. just knoin that this great story isnt goin to die out like this will make waitin a few wks worth while. again, i kno im not the only one who feels this way. alot of ppl want you to continue this story. doesnt that mean anythin?! ive been readin this story since last year and i still have hope that youll continue it... i jus want the happiness in KNOWING that youll end it properly. plz... this is definitely one of the best fanfics ive ever read.. plz dont let this story end this way. thats all we ask... plz...
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Title: ¬.¬
Reviewed By: InuAngel788 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CMON!! you gotta update! ive been waiting so long!! its a great story! i really dont see why you dont wanna continue it anymore! if i had a story THIS good i dont think id ever let it end this terribly. At least TRY to add a new chapter to it! I kno im not the only person who feels this way. Your a great author and i appreciate your writing which is why i dont want you to stop this story! i LOVE inuyasha and its definitely THE best inu/kag fic ive ever read. I jus cant stand seeing it die like this knowing how great its goin. PLZ for the love of me and all your fans! DONT END IT THIS WAY!! PLZ KEEP IT GOIN!! THIS STORY COULD ONLY GET BETTER UNDER UR HANDS ALONE!! i dont even want it continued by another person! it wouldnt b the same! i know it wouldnt! plz pareathe! even if its jus a chapter every month or wutever. just knoin that this great story isnt goin to die out like this will make waitin a few wks worth while. again, i kno im not the only one who feels this way. alot of ppl want you to continue this story. doesnt that mean anythin?! ive been readin this story since last year and i still have hope that youll continue it... i jus want the happiness in KNOWING that youll end it properly. plz... this is definitely one of the best fanfics ive ever read.. plz dont let this story end this way. thats all we ask... plz...
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Title: ¬.¬
Reviewed By: InuAngel788 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CMON!! you gotta update! ive been waiting so long!! its a great story! i really dont see why you dont wanna continue it anymore! if i had a story THIS good i dont think id ever let it end this terribly. At least TRY to add a new chapter to it! I kno im not the only person who feels this way. Your a great author and i appreciate your writing which is why i dont want you to stop this story! i LOVE inuyasha and its definitely THE best inu/kag fic ive ever read. I jus cant stand seeing it die like this knowing how great its goin. PLZ for the love of me and all your fans! DONT END IT THIS WAY!! PLZ KEEP IT GOIN!! THIS STORY COULD ONLY GET BETTER UNDER UR HANDS ALONE!! i dont even want it continued by another person! it wouldnt b the same! i know it wouldnt! plz pareathe! even if its jus a chapter every month or wutever. just knoin that this great story isnt goin to die out like this will make waitin a few wks worth while. again, i kno im not the only one who feels this way. alot of ppl want you to continue this story. doesnt that mean anythin?! ive been readin this story since last year and i still have hope that youll continue it... i jus want the happiness in KNOWING that youll end it properly. plz... this is definitely one of the best fanfics ive ever read.. plz dont let this story end this way. thats all we ask... plz...
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Title: seven day
Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to add. this is killing me to wait for more of hte story
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Reviewed By: Loulou279 On: August 29, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon. I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: QT_nicki On: May 30, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING PLEASE I THINK ILL DIE IF YOU DONT!!!!!!! ITS AMAZING!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
update plz!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Perra~ On: April 15, 2004 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok its been like a year, what the hell happened did you die i mean how long has it been since you updated.did u forget how or just stop cause its not right to leave people hangin.if you did just stop plz some one take over cause your taking to long you got to update once in a while. If you got sick than i understand but a year come on thats just to long .did you get in an accident then get sick than like got really sick like a chain reaction or sumthin cause i think you forgot. if you did SOMEONE TAKE OVER!!!! or if you didnt UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im beggin and tellin you to plz do it ive been cheking up on this story like every day for a while how do u expect to get reveiws if you dont update im about to cross you off my list and not check any more. if your busy i understand im a patient person but this is just to long i no im probably not the only one who feels this way YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!plz?
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Reviewed By: Poppy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 04:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I didn't know you wrote Inuyasha fanfiction too!! I remember you were one of my favorite author's on ff.net a few years back with "The One's They Take For Granted". That was before the NC-17 ruling though. It's great to see you've been pulling out more fanfiction, especially fanfiction as good as this. I hope you're abe to continue and finish it soon, it really is a good representation of 'Inuyasha getting stuck in Kagome's world' deal. Until then, take care!!!
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: Jene-san On: January 21, 2004 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
update, plese ;_;
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Title: You Rock!
Reviewed By: Angelove On: January 10, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I've been waiting for awhile. I need to know what's gonna happen next. Keep up the good work with your fanfiction.
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Title: sammie
Reviewed By: sammie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHHH!!! I LIKE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IM HOOKED!
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: December 17, 2003 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fanfic and I think it would be cool if you continued it soon I REALLY want to read more.
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Title: Awseome fic, but where's the rest?
Reviewed By: Faye237 On: November 24, 2003 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One great, creative, and sweet (tooth-rottingly) fic. I have enjoyed every min. of its waffy goodness. I hope that more chapters are coming... this is too good a story to let it just die so uncerimoniously.
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Reviewed By: Ahrima (Ahrima@mail2hell.com) On: November 19, 2003 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
So far, this is a very good story. It exibits great crreativity and originality. And, it's fun to read :). Plus, the spelling and grammer are better than above average (which doesn't say much), they're good! But, you haven't updated in a while :(. I think the story is excellent, and strongly encourage you to finish it.
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Reviewed By: Ericyamaha89 On: November 08, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry up and update its been forever
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Title: Ya gonnas...
Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gonna update anytime this century!? Update!? PLEASE~!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
ur story's great and ive been suffering from withdrawal since u havent posted in months! please continue!!
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Title: konnichi wa
Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gonna update any time this century? It's good
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool, i like it. i hope u get more up soon. l8r
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Reviewed By: bejipan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 01:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are really staying in character. But I wosh that you would update soon.
Bejipan |
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Hope you update soon, although I know how it goes sometimes. |
Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 12, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to continue this anytime soon? What happens next? |
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