| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: sammie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
MAGNIFICENT! update! update! update! whoo hoo! pwetty pwezzz!!! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I'll be waiting for you to write more. Also was thinking why not have Kagome take him to the beach or something like that.
Well , any ways keep it comeing.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: February 17, 2003 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I can't wait for more fluff! ^_^ this is really cute, and I hope you can upload faster if possible! Thanks!
*~sorena27~* |
Reviewed By: Raven On: February 17, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was good, its now one of my favorites, i love how you have the story line done, and i think the feelings between inuyasha and Kagome are cool. Its just a bit confusing at times but that just makes it better to read so as i can figure out the problem myself. Please update again soon. |
Reviewed By: Alia Lowe On: February 17, 2003 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. I love the idea and I love your style of writing. You've done a terrific job of portraying Inu-chan and Kagome's emotions. I know how hard it is to write those situations out and I commend you for doing such a wonderful job.
Maybe in a future chapter you could send Inuyasha to the mall. It would be funny to see Inuyasha vs. the escalator. Lol
Maybe you could even send Inuyasha to school one day and use your creative writing rules to make Inuyasha a human ALL DAY. That would certainly make Hoho (I mean Hojo) jealous all day, not to mention introduce Kagome's friends to the guy that they have suspected she has the 'hots for' (Inu-chan).
Feel free to hit me up on my e-mail if you need any more ideas. Just look it up at mm.org (it won't let me sign in right now, grr).
~Alia |
Reviewed By: gackt_emu On: February 17, 2003 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write the next part soon! I can't wait for it! I know you're busy but could you try updating it sooner? Thanks! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: February 17, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious and down right cute. Inuyasha stuck in Kagome's time is even more funny than visa verse. Everything is new and amazing to him. Kawaii. |
Reviewed By: Crittle On: February 09, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write wonderfully, please continue! Lol, I'm dying here! What happens?! |
Reviewed By: Vashy On: February 10, 2003 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uwaa~ where's the rest? (: i wanna read more, this fic rox0red :D |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
dear god Pareathe continue! It's been so long, have you died or something? A WHOLE month.
I was bored, so turned back to page 16 and saw this story. I thought it was completed from when i had last read it, but nope!
(-.-)>[*sigh*] |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is soo cute. I hope you write more soon. I'll be waiting.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: lonewolf On: February 02, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! AWESOME story! Your style of writing and ideas you have are unique and, well, awesome :D Congradulations. You have just been added to my little list of authors that I check for updates on, um, daily. I'm serious- daily! I have no life :P Keep writing :D |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update, update, UPDATE!!!
please add a *ahem* LEMON scene!
(i know im a hentai) |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: January 27, 2003 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh and continue soon, its really good, and don't forget to add some lemony goodness, or at least a little. Or just scrap that, just continue soon please.
Kilala ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: January 27, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic I can't wait to see what unfolds when Inu stays for the week, like when he stayed at her house in the Manga and Souta was trying to get him to bathe with him, and blow dry his hair. It will be interesting to see what modern technology will affect him. I thought I was the only one who thought it would be nice to read him visiting Kagome's time, great minds think alike but also for themselves. Keep up the good work.
Kilala ^_- |
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