"Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:32 CDT Comment/Review: I've really enjoyed this fic! Keep up the good work - you have a great style that seems really natural... |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:09 CDT Comment/Review: wat an amazing story...u better b updating cuz its not nice to deprive us all of ur excellent stories lol i luv it! 10 10 10 10 10! |
Reviewed By: Tom On: July 28, 2003 13:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Inu Yasha Should take a bullet meant for kagome on the Rosary in human form and as he loses conctioness he thinks he failed Kagome and his his sword transforms and his demon blood takes over. The lemon can be Kagome trying to bring Inu Yasha back under control trough her love. At least free him from the Rosary. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this idea a lot, InuYasha being stuck in Kagome's time! I wonder what kind of havoc he's gonna cause at the mall? Or is he gonna be a good little puppy and try to be civilized to try to show Kagome that he CAN be like a human being because of what her friends had said about him. Anyway, I hope they make up soon! And update really fast! |
Reviewed By: anime goth On: July 28, 2003 03:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: update or ill go strait up kikyo on you ass!!!!!!
PS cool story now like i said countiue or "ill hunt you down and gut you like a fish." the grinch. |
Reviewed By: carmela On: July 28, 2003 03:05 CDT Comment/Review: Thanks for updating I'm so excited!! Keep up the good work I can't wait for the next installment. |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 00:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon |
Reviewed By: kookie On: July 27, 2003 23:27 CDT Comment/Review: I'm so hap hap happy you updated :) |
Reviewed By: susieray On: July 27, 2003 19:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really got into this story and can't wait to read more. Please update and finish the Seven Days. I would definately read more of your work. |
Reviewed By: Pan On: July 20, 2003 23:44 CDT Comment/Review: Higurashi, that's how you spell Kagome's lastname. |
Reviewed By: Tom On: July 28, 2003 13:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey Inu Yasha Should jump in front of a bullet meant for Kagome and take it on the rosary in human form about 2 hours befor his demon blood takes over so he doesn't die although he'll be out cold for the day and have the lemon at night about three hours after dinner. Either free him from the rosary. Oh and neck wounds are survivable as long as an artery isn't severed I should know I'm a surrivor of one myself. |
Reviewed By: rocky On: June 30, 2003 02:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: your like really behind PLEASE UPDATE
I love your story. I would love to read more of it |
Reviewed By: Darkmoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 16:22 CDT Comment/Review: Hey this is a really great story but what about the other 5 days we need to know whats happening |
Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: June 26, 2003 15:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heya! Nice fic, I love it! They're so "in character," if you know what I mean. I can actually picture them saying what they say. If that makes any sense at all to you. Anway, it's just too CUUUUUUUUUUUTE and I love it! Update soon or I will injure you. Not really. It's an empty threat. It's just meant to motivate you. Keep on ficcing! Ja ne! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Aerandir On: June 17, 2003 01:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, I'm writing a review... i NEVER write reviews. Must tell you something about how much I enjoyed your story.
At any rate, I was thinking maybe Kagome should bring the human Inu-chan to a dance or some other public thing that goes into the night, so he might have a little problem with some ears sprouting up in public. *lol* Wouldn't that be fun to see how they get out of that situation?
Anyway, I love your fic and eagerly await more.
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