| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Messed On: August 24, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please contiue it's a very good story... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: stacie On: August 23, 2003 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue, very good. :) |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: August 03, 2003 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome I love your story, I'm so glad your back, your hilarious. Dog shit instead of Turd was brilliant. I love Inuyasha and am obsessed (nah just kidding) you doin a great job, yu wrk the story line to make it your own. Your fingerprints are etchd over every sentence.
Kilala ^-^ |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: August 02, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't give a 10+ - It's wonderful to see you have updated again. I know you've had a lot to deal with in your private life, I only hope things will get better in time.
I enjoyed this chapter immensely from Inuyasha waking up tired and sore to the tiff they had because of the impression Kagome's friends have of IY. The description of a robe from IY's eyes was great and conversation between IY and Kagome's mom was wonderful especially his thoughts about what it meant and how it related to his own feelings. Well, you have let IY meet her friends and confront Hojo. You also are explaining what is happening with Miroku, Sango, etc and I loved that Kouga has coming looking for Kagome. That section should get interesting too. I still hope Kagome and IY go to a movie or a school dance especially on the day he's human and I still like the convertible idea. And the mall, that's great. It should be very interesting. And let's not forget that lemon. Wonderful writing, thanks for sharing. (Did you see you are an inspiration, yet?) |
Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 02:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
So glad to see you've updated! I really hope things settle out in your life so I can read the rest of the story. Selfish, that would be me.
Grins, Nokomarie |
Reviewed By: Rocky On: August 01, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! You finally updated yeaaaa!!! Good please keep it up i was enjoyin your story!!! So update asap!! Thanks :.) |
Reviewed By: samiam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story!!Inu-Kag--great stuff!!love the tension/bickering---aint love grand^_^ no offense...I just wish you could update faster!!!! I hate having to wait for good stuff!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yuni-ku bishoujo On: July 31, 2003 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!!! you must write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Rue On: July 31, 2003 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANUS!!!! This is a cute fic, but ya gotta keep going!Font Color
PLEASE FINISH! |
Reviewed By: Andrea Meiouh On: July 30, 2003 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there!
Congratulations!!!
Congratulations for the wonderful story. I loved your fic, the personages are well characterized and the love-hatred's climate of InuYasha and Kagome is perfect!
Please, continues writing and updating this incredible fic! |
Reviewed By: playfullpup17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! and uh Wow! I really love your fanfic and I am totally addictid to it as well. Do to a convo in the begining of chap 3, that Inu had with Kagome's mom, I wanted to ask you if this was gonna end happy. I'm all about Inuyasha and Kagome so I really hope there is a happy ending! you are truley tallented and I hope that you continue to keep writting fanfiction!
Great hugz
Great luvz
~Serena |
Reviewed By: susieray [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really enjoy your stories, I can't wait to read more. I was excited to see a new chapter posted and will keep my eyes peeled for more. I think you are keeping to the heart of the story, the interactions are great. Keep up the good work, and post more. |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Freak On: July 29, 2003 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I hit the keyboard on accident and hit 3 extra letters.+_+" |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Freak On: July 29, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!^_^ but I can't wait any longer!I MUST see the other five days!!* +
U |
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked it very much, you rank up at the top. Let Kouga squeeze thru the well after the lemon. Might be fun to see a fight in modern times. Anyway, please follow up very soon!!!!! |
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