| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 25, 2003 14:16 CST
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That was just so wonderfully written! You capture the characters' personalities so well. I can't wait for the next chapters. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked. the plot is very well ordered and its very cute! Nice JOB
Mikky |
Reviewed By: 2pac On: February 23, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and finish writing. This is a really good fic and I'm not very patient. |
Reviewed By: Rika On: February 23, 2003 16:00 CST
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Another superb chapter, I can't wait for the next! |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: February 22, 2003 22:55 CST
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I liked it, just add a little spice if you know what I mean. Maybe you should make her grand pa trick them into going somewhere in her time that is away from the public eye but still romantic. Or wahtever just keep writing, its a great story. |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: February 21, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it was a fluff chapter, it was great. The characters are so IC, I can visualize everything you write. I loved the rose and storyline around it. I don't know how soon, but you will get your pic.
As for suggestions for future chapters...Kagome's friends have to me InuYasha sometime, whether it's at the McD's or a school function, etc. It could even be the night he is human. He should also be able to confront Hojo, maybe at a school dance or a movie. Ya, he should have to see a movie...maybe, that takes place during the feudal time. Stephanie thought InuYasha and Kagome should drive in a convertable somewhere and of course, the lemon. Anyway, there are a few ideas...I'll be waiting to see what you decide to write about in next the chapter. I hope you write a little about what is happening to Miroku and Sango. If you don't, Burned will be unhappy. |
Reviewed By: lia_girl On: February 21, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv ur fic!!! Hope that u write more soon and keep updating. I wish that I don't hava to wait that long like for all the other fics. I enjoyed ur story by the way |
Reviewed By: Shiari On: February 20, 2003 17:36 CST
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Mall!!!!!!!!! ::pounces:: this is a really really good fic! continue pleaaase! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: February 19, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I can not wait to see how it turns out and what exactly is Naraku's plan for Inuyasha and Kagoma. Please hurry and write more! |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:01 CST
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update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KiiKii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow, what a fantastice fic!!! Your plot is really original, and I'd crack up at the thought of Inu-Yasha facing the mall! Lol... keep the fic coming, because it's really wonderful! Thanks!
~*LiMeAwAyGiRl~* |
Reviewed By: DBprincess116 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 09:49 CST
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT STUFF MORE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 thumbs up! This piece is coming along beautifully. IY and Kagome are very much in character, making it smoother and easier to read. I can totally envision everything happening as if I'm glued to the boob tube ^_^ I can't to see how this story continues!
~EM |
Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 03:55 CST
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C'est moi, Rei-chan! You have to write more la petite! Lol, basic translation, my name's rei-chan and you gotta write more of this story! It's great, chere. Lol, I have french on the brain, sorry. |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: February 17, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much!!!! The whole rose thing turned my heart to silly puddy!!! Ooooooh you just have to write more soon....I don't think I can wait a month. Please?? Pretty please??? I'm a hopeless romantic, and the wait will drive me CRAZY!!! |
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