| "Twisted Lemonade" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fic was really well written and very original. Wouldve been better if Chichi wouldve atleast regretted it and goku came in and owned Yamcha but hey, its your ff. Other then the unusual pairing, A+
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
a different paring is always nice. very good. well written and enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: ~Krissy~ On: February 15, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That wuz pretty damn good. I liked it but I thought it wuz kinda sad that ChiChi had cheated on Goku but, besides that I liked it I think the many people that read it were jus too lazy to review
~Krissy~ |
Reviewed By: ~Krissy~ On: February 15, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That wuz pretty damn good. I liked it but I thought it wuz kinda sad that ChiChi had cheated on Goku but, besides that I liked it I think the many people that read it were jus too lazy to review
~Krissy~ |
Reviewed By: joi On: January 07, 2003 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bravo!!! There's nothing greater than a change of scenery. I want to commend you for writing this ff. It was different (a huge plus) and it was also entertaining. I was kinda sad that, although many viewed your story, no one reviewed *whipes tear from eye*. Don't let that get ya down. Great story and keep pushing the envelope. |
