| "Just Can't Get Enough" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: goku mum On: February 08, 2003 12:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a really good job Raven, and I wish you much luck in the Valentine's contest. Of course I liked the two fullblooded saiyajins together going for it, but I look forward to the sequels to this, the wedding hmmm (but who will wear the white wedding dress?)So, much work is left to be done!! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: February 08, 2003 11:28 EST
Comment/Review:
I liked your take on the bonding process. |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 10:26 EST
Comment/Review:
I new I could not compete with him!! LOL I think I told you as much! Sighs sadly. One the other hand ^_^ I love this fic! good job Raven |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 09:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was a really cute fic!! I wish you good luck in the valentines day comp!! Please write the sequals to this, i really want to read them! If you have a mailing list, my email is
kamehameha_roshi@dbzgtlegacy.com
thanks for such a great fic!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: February 03, 2003 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK...no sex and I still loved it. You've got a great fic going here. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: February 02, 2003 17:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For Raven's Day, my review as promised *grin*. Really nice Truten fic. After all the angsty stuff I was reading these last days it was great to read some nice citrus fluffy stuff. The plot point with Goku having a saiyajin female mate in afterlife was excellent, and Vegeta wants to visit him. That leaves some perspectives for the future. As they are bonded, no Vegoku? (But, I did this thing, with a double saiyajin bond, in a fic: one female/male, the other male/male....) |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this and just not reviewing MY BAD. And still you knew I would have to comment! DARN new competetion for my beloved GOKU! How could you. We all know he loves me best!! ^_^ (hopes she gets the joke) |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga ans Evil Yami Inga On: February 02, 2003 01:43 EST
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EI: That was sssoooo kawaii!!!
EYI: no that was sad..
EI: that too but it was more kawaii.
EYI: goku cheated on chichi and *is it with the millinum belt* OW!!
EI: don't argue with me! i dont care about chichi i hate her!
EYI: @_@ ... ok.. i give! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chi Chi is put in her proper place...the trash bag is tied neatly and tossed as gently as possible into the nearest recepticle. YAY!
Another fantastic chapter in the sweetest yaoi Truten fic up, to date!
I loved how Bulma glomped everyone! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again, you are phenomenaly AWESOME! :) This fic is just SOOOOOOOO good! Goten and Trunks are so cute together :) Makes ya all bubbly inside. heh... I can't wait for your next chapter :) I really hope the next one isnt the end though!! *hopes and prays*
toodles! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh good god your story was soooooooo good. As much as I luv Goten him ~n~ Trunks are so for each other. I love ur fic soooo much. I was getting so tired of them damned evil het pairings. Trunks and Pan, Goten and Bra. Tell me, how the hell dose that make any sense. Those girls are like so much younger then them. Anyways, getting off the horrible het subject, good job. I hope u write more. |
Reviewed By: Desiivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 13:23 EST
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I want one of those bots!!!!
~*Ivy*~ |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yaim Inga On: January 29, 2003 03:18 EST
Comment/Review:
EI: o.0 I LOVE IT!!! gotta luv the smut!!
EYI: ~_~ crazy hentai woman....
EI: ~_~ stupid baka men..get back into the mellinum belt!!!
EYI: ACK!!! NO!! NOT AGAIN!!
EI: I SAID GIT!! 0.o oh what weird reviews i leave.. email me at inga_maximus@yahoo.com when you update!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo, a plot too? That's even better!!! Hmm, just curious... but is this a Goku and 'Geta fic too? ^_^ Hee hee... nevermind, just asking... |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: January 24, 2003 12:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say. It's so great that I can't even describe it. I love this fic. It's one of the best "Truten" I've ever read. And lemons are delicious. Please continue. I can't wait to read new chapter. |
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