| "Just Can't Get Enough" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Desiivy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW,
I have read many "Truten" stories, They're my favorite. plus I love lemons,
Out of all of the this story, was the best,
Oh, please hurry and write, Please.
*Ivy |
Reviewed By: Bomber Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 11:20 EST
Comment/Review:
^_^ yay! *loves TxG fics* good fic good fic good fic! yay! |
Reviewed By: hentai_lover On: January 13, 2003 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of all this is like my favorite pairing of all time! Plus it's my fave kind (henai lemon)! Thanx for getting this far, NOW KEEP GOING!!!! please? YAY for the awesome author! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 17:11 EST
Comment/Review:
*says in Goten chibi voice which she can actually do EXTREMELY well (ask for a voice file someday and I'll do it for you! =D)* "WEE HA HA!!! TRUNKSIE IS A HOTTIE!!! TRUNKSIE IS A HOTTIE!!!" XD (And Goten is, too!)
LOL!!! Oh no...now I really DO have to try doing this voice impression and recording it now...LMAO!
Whoaaa!!! GREAT chapter!!!
I still say that you are one of my most favorite authors EVER!!! ^_^ I just don't understand one thing...
If chapters 2 and 3 were only 95% lemon...what the hell is a 100% lemon going to be like?!?
DEAR KAMI!!! O_O
But I guess in order to find out I'll just have to wait and see!!! ^_^ I loved this chapter with a passion!!! Can't wait until you crank out the next one!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I would've reviewed this chapter sooner (I started reading it a yesterday), but I had to go somewhere and didn't have time, so here's that review I owe ya!!! LOVED it!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE VERY VERY SOON!!!! =D |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 14:23 EST
Comment/Review:
awwwwwww!! *sniffel* its just so sweet! you need to continue this and soon :-) And I agree with most of the reviewers, you have an amazing gift for this... don't ever let that die! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 23:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Raven, this fic is just so enchanting! I watched DBZ on the tube today and it was the episode where Trunks and Goten are training in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, and after reading your fic, I'm watching their interaction from a completely different standpoint! It really makes sense! Your writing style is exceptional and so descriptive. I can't wait for more... |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 11, 2003 14:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...God girl! That was great...you are converting me...slowly but surely.
Can't wait to read the next Chapter! |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 10:30 EST
Comment/Review:
I did a picture earlier of Goten and Trunks kissing if you wanted to check it out. It's not much, but oh, well. :) Copy paste into address bar, I guess..
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=135407
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 10:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ecellent story! Trunks and Goten were sooo meant for each other! :)
~Ami |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What's not to love about two horny demis gettin it on! So aptly titled- just can't get enough!- AND I CAN'T EITHER! I love how Goten had to do it even though the shampoo was still in his hair. And the little deatils, describing the soap in the water as it banked: WOW. Man, that's beautiful. The emotion between the two of them is so moving. I loved it.
I feel like I wanna be that guy from Spinal Tap: "Yeah, but this goes to 11!" This sure does!!!
I am gonna read it agin & aaagin & aaagiiin.......8p |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 20:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* This fic was sooo good!!! Are you sure this is your first fanfic ever??? OMG!!! This like...tops every single lemon I have ever read!!! You are the greatest writer!!! O_O!!!
^_^ Please update ASAP!!! I can't live without reading more of this sweet lil' Trunks 'n' Goten story!!! *_*
~*Rizu-chan*~
- Trunks/Goten 4Eva!!! =D AWWW it's so cuuuute!!! *_* -
PS: Usually I never "Number Rate" the stories that I read and review...and when I do, it's usually never a perfect 10, or I only will mark the enjoyment factor and overall rating. In conclusion: You seriously earned all these 10's. It was the best style of writing, best storyline, and best EVERYTHING I have ever read!!! PLEASE, I BEG of you!!! Update NOW!!! O_o;; *twitch* |
Reviewed By: motorrace On: January 06, 2003 03:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with both little_ninjin and Phantomscribe72, this is the best lemon i've read (and i've read like 100);
a third chapter would be great.
one more comment: you did a wonderful job of coming uop with a way that sj's get thier mates; if i didn't know this was fanfiction, i would've thought that Toriyama himself came up with it. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 09:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm blushing again :)
Excellent job! As you know, I'm not a huge fan of yaoi...but you did such an amazing job...it made complete sense that Trunks and Goten would end up together.
You have a true gift! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 09:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
There is nothing that you can do to make this better- except write the third chapter!
Easily the best GotenXTrunks lemon out there! EASILY!
I love it! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 09:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Trunks...Goten...at it like knives...HEAVEN!!!!! *pushes full drool bucket out of the way, and pulls drool bath tub over instead* That intro to chapter two was sooo cute!! A really nice touch to a Really sexy fic...I loved the way they spoke to each other!! *melts* (good job the tub's there) They're so well suited and totally adorable together!! Looks like we have another excellent yaoi writer on our hands!!!!! |
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