| "Just Can't Get Enough" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: ZWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just casually sitting here wondering where the rest of the chapters(after chapter 3) are... *sad face* I have to say one thing.... AMAZING story! It's so soooo hard to come about really good GotenxTrunks stories like this... They're always so angst and complicated... But yours was perfect... sweet, fluffy and just amazing! Keep writing! You're doing an amazing job :) |
Reviewed By: Demien [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That was awsome! I'm a big fan of Tr/Gt fics, and that was a very good one. Well, I agree that you were a bit easy with the boys, well, they just decided out of the blue to mate while they were 100% hetero? And the next day they moved together?? However, I still think that it was very sweet, and the affair between Goku and Veggie... It startled me!! I wish that you continue it, a so well-writen, angst-free Truten fanfic is a rare thing to find nowadays...
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Reviewed By: Gokuson On: May 20, 2003 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great stroy. hope that you at least add more to it. well if not this was a great fic. |
Reviewed By: reader101 On: April 16, 2003 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a nice turn of phrase. And the erotica is very well done.
i have one big, major issue with this plot. The Goku/ Vegeta pairing seems like something you threw in last minute. It really detracts from the story.
Also, you depend on dialogue alot. It's good dialogue, but I keep getting the feeling that you could have used action, flashbacks, symbolism or any number of devices to make things more interesting and realistic.
For example... how many people sit around and explain every detail about their feelings like that? Not many. As a guy I have to tell you... the likelihood that two men would do it is zero. Sorry, I just don't see two dudes talking like women about their feelings.
It sound spicky. But it's because, judging from the reviews here, no one is telling you about these issues. you are a truly talented writer. with more foresight and realism I think you can really do amazing work. |
Reviewed By: rockerdix250 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 20:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look i finally got my user name lol
ppl you are looking at the great novellas of 21ts century!. If you’re a dbz fan and you have not read her stories then your going to hell because it’s a sin. If she were British I would call he work the crown jewels of the empire. Her work truly has been a marvel to behold, Especially since this was her first!
Everyone should consider themselves VERY privileged, lucky, and honored to read anything she writes! there is ABSOLUTLY NOTHING you can do to make this story more enjoyable except WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 19:02 EST
Comment/Review:
*cries* this is the end? GET YOUR BUTT MOVING ON A SEQUAL! :)
I can't wait! |
Reviewed By: shadow fox girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great please update soon. also good luck. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 01:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to see an other story yeah. I liked it keep up the good work and keep them coming. |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: February 09, 2003 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
100 thumbs up! Keep up the great work. You are very tallented. ^_^
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 13, 2003 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait for you to continue this fic ...but i will say so far so goooooooooood |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 11:28 EST
Comment/Review:
YAY! THIS ISNT THE END!
*dances*
this story is so kick ass, and finding out that you're gonna continue just made my day!
Now I have something to think about while at work today! what's Chichi gonna say? oooooh I hope she gets shot down! How can one NOT approve of Goten and Trunks? I mean HELL they're adorable!!
*squeals*
your awesome!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
oh, and, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTENST!
toodles! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 20:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know... I don't even like Dragonball, but this one was beautiful! :) I haven't seen anything of the series, so I don't have much of a clue of who the people are and so, but I like the way you portray them... :)
Oh, and lots and lots of sex is never wrong either... ;) |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 13:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I like how Goku and Vegeta get best of both worlds, there...oh bad pun...but GOOD G/V romance! Nice touch!
And the SEX- the SEX!! I loved it! The perfect response to a proposal! "Touch me, Goten"- man that was HOT! I loved it! Did I mention how much I loved that? |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 13:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomp* Raven you are just tooooo totally awesome for your own good!! I loved it!!!! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I like how Goku and Vegeta get best of both worlds, there...oh bad pun...but GOOD G/V romance! Nice touch!
And the SEX- the SEX!! I loved it! The perfect response to a proposal! "Touch me, Goten"- man that was HOT! I loved it! Did I mention how much I loved that? |
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