| "Miko no Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: December 26, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the better lemons simply because those parts are secondary to the story. That is what I think a Creative lemon should be A story where sex is apart of tit but not a overwhemling part of it. Nicely done, you should update soon, since we haven't heard from Fluffy and Naraku imself (Excluding Kagura) Oh and Will ayame make a reverngeful appearence for her fiance Kouga! (Check both the manga and the anime!) dennisud
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW KOGA-KUN I FEEL SORRY
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Reviewed By: kitsunefirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:31 CST
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update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soonupdate soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon o yeah will update soon pppppppplllllllllllzzzz!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you have got to update you havent in a while and i want to read more......wwwaaaahhhhh
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Reviewed By: NightChild01 (from ff.net) On: September 11, 2003 15:23 CDT
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This is a very interesting fic, I really enjoy reading it. I'm interested to see what happens nexy, so please continue.
NC01 |
Reviewed By: Inu_kagome_nut [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story please write more its driving me nuts I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS lol keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_kagomenut On: September 03, 2003 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excelent fanfic one of my favs i cant wait to read more please hurry with the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: July 30, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was great. i was really expecting a kagome/inuyasha chappter again but u surprised me and did a sango an' miroku one. personally i liked them being more nasty. it's better tat way. hey keep up tha good work. can't wait till u get tha next chapter up. hopefully it's gonna be a kagome an' inuyasha one. ::hint:: ::hint:: ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: July 09, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice fic! Update soon! They're all just so cuuuuuuuuute and I love it! Update or FEEL MY WRATH! ~.^ ok, ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 01:22 CDT
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We have been oh so paticent. Please wake up your muse ( tell them to vacation later ) and update.
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Reviewed By: Yuki On: June 28, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an excellent skill for writing, I can wait to read more, keep up the remarkble work!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more!!!! story good... making your readers think that you are going to kill off one or more of the characters, bad. I don't know why your comment on the bottom of the page made me think that that is what you are going to do, but it did.
Have Kagome's Grandpa question her about Kagome being Inuyasha's "mate" and what that means... oh, that would be nice and evil...
Oh, yeah, write more. you good. you are the author. don't let them characters try to boss you around. you are in charge of every aspect of their lives. don't forget that. this is one of the greatest glories of being on the keyboard side of the monitor. you are in control.
may the shwartz be with you.
(please take my advice! I've been with you from the start hell, I was your first reviewer. due to a problem with registration, I had to change my name from razorbld to Inu Bullet. Now that I think of it, Inu Bullet suits me better than razor blade, which is what razorbld stands for, due to my great love of all things firearm.)
enough about me, this is about you. your story gets better and better. It's plot is deepening, and the screwing scenes are getting more detailed. the screwing scenes are extremely important. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: MrVampire On: June 19, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story. keep up the good work, and update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:01 CDT
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Wow! You're really orginal! I've never read a story like this before with Kagome and Inu-Yasha! I really like it and hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rae-chan On: June 04, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my fav lemon stories.. can't wait for the next chapter. Also, love the way you use Japanese in the story. For those of us who watch this subbed it's really easy to understand, and you use enough to make it seem realistic while still keeping the flow of the story. Good job! |
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