| "Belated Gift 2: The Gift that Keeps on Giving" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: demize [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot! theres just no other word for it. keep writing id love to read more
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Reviewed By: Jazzy t On: October 17, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was (is) an outstanding fic. However, stories lose momentum and drive when the chapters come out so far apart. I have always looked foward to reading this story, but now I have lost interest. Next time consider not posting until the entire story is complete.
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Reviewed By: Kat (Sinnamonkat) On: September 28, 2003 11:52 CDT
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I love this chapter! I ran through an entire gamut of emotions reading it. I'm glad they are working everything out. *glomps*
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Reviewed By: sakura star On: August 14, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This is the best lemon/romance fanfic I have ever read.You are a fantastic writer and I hope you contuniue this.I dont know whear the hell you get this talent from but Im glad you do.It`s a great story idea its sad (I cried a lot) but in some it was incredibaly funny.You make the reader see a dark side of Shigure a side you really dont get to see.Great story great idea great writer.Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 24, 2003 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic!!! This is definitely one of the best Shigure+Tooru fanfiction! They are made for each other..hehehe..! Please, continue soon!!
Sorry for mistakes, my english is not very good...^^ |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 24, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic!!! This is definitely one of the best Shigure+Tooru fanfiction! They are made for each other..hehehe..! Please, continue soon!!
Sorry, my english is not very good...^^ |
Reviewed By: Lain On: July 16, 2003 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The prequel to Belated Gift 2 was rather light-hearted, considering. I didn't expect BG2 to be so... well, dark. Shigure's personality is rather frightening in its insecurity and possessiveness. I really feel bad for Tooru to be stuck in a relationship where she is stripped of dignity and forced into humiliation. This story is very engaging, but also very hard for me to read at times. It actually took me a few attempts to read some chapters and not look away from the screen, hence my decision of an overall 9. I'm just the overy emotional type. It is very well written, a real rarity among fanfiction nowadays. Well done! |
Reviewed By: infidel On: July 13, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderfully creepy. You have the psychological angles covered. Tooru's behavior is typical of someone in an abusive relationship and you've managed to blend characteristics of the alpha pack male perfectly with Shigure. I have to say, the romantic in me does not want her to end up with Shigure but I don't think that Tooru is strong enough to break free on her own. But anyway, pleas update! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a truely, truely great fic. everyones fairly canon, and the plots great. i love the way u describe what the characters feeling. no lemon in this chapter, but it was still increadable. i was so happy when i was u updated!!! very very very very well written. all of it, lemon or not. easily my fav straight fic right now, plus it gets updated more often then my other fav. (especially considering the length of the chapters) have u thought about sending something to get published? u have a wonderful style or writting. man, if only i could write like that... ur awesome. keeeeeeeep goin!
chara |
Reviewed By: poet in the dark On: June 12, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. I liked how the characters are written and how the relationships are coming along. Though Shigure's character sure needs a bit of growing up but then he wouldn't be Shigure. |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: June 12, 2003 12:49 CDT
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You should conitue this. It is quite good. I like it very much.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: dumdeedum On: June 10, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very dark, erotic lemon fic..and very well written. I'm not sure if I would call Tooru and Shigure's relationship as love but bordering more on obsession. Kinda like "Endless Love".
As for Shigure, very believable & credible (since I knew someone very much like him, even the same age gap!) His deep insecurity is SO real!
As for Tooru, I'd like to see her character develop more strongly without going OOC.
Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Aya On: April 02, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Merrow, you MUST continue! Shigure is definitely a sexy complicated bastard, and you've captured him beautifully. The chemistry between Shigure and Tooru is written convincingly, but I am wondering if you'd write a longer Tooru monologue to fill in how her feelings formed so strongly for Shigure from the first Belated Gift story to Belated Gift 2. That would definitely fill in the gap for me!
Chapter 5 was very dark and psychologically twisted. Personally it was a bit difficult for me to see Tooru abused so, but I am curious to see what plans you have for this. Of course, this doesn't mean that it wasn't exciting as hell. You definitely are the Gureru writer of choice for me (hint: I hope you do more :) |
Reviewed By: i like ur fic!!! On: March 31, 2003 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so psychological it makes my head hurts sometimes. to turn an innocent anime such as furuba into something so angst and make it so believable at the same time... i dunno whether to cry or applause. but i've 2 say that it waz very enjoyable reading ur fic (hehe...) so pleaz continue soon! |
Reviewed By: random reader On: March 18, 2003 04:26 CST
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good story.. a lemon that actually has a plot
wondering if shigure feels bad for making her have sex with hatori and ayame, and if how he feels about tooru having lain with someone else |
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