| "Belated Gift 2: The Gift that Keeps on Giving" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: TJ On: March 09, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just please update as soon as you can. Your fic is good. |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 13:29 CST
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Aww, this chapter ended on a rather sad note. It will be interesting to see how you finish it. Post again soon!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 12:16 CST
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I am glad to see they finally confessed their love to each other. Now to see how it works from here...
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 10:48 CST
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Aww...I liked the scene at the end there and the scene with him bathing her. Very sweet!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 10:18 CST
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Hot damn! I read the first lemon, which I think I forgot to review. Must go do that. ^_^;; Anyway, I like how this started off, even if I partly felt sorry for Tohru during some parts. She thinks he is somewhat indifferent and this isn't exactly the healthiest way to start a relationship, but I look forward to reading the rest and finding out how you develop it. Good job so far!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Anime-angel On: February 13, 2003 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i liked the whole thing but the master thing where he hurts her was ummmmmm..... sad!It got me mad at him. Anyway it was great all the way through. I hope to see the next chapter very soon!!! Oh and I hope Akito lets them stay together(hint hint) Anyway i like your story and hope to see more of it. Ja ne ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ·=[bLuE=TiGeR]=· On: January 22, 2003 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man....i actually had tears in my eyes while reading this.....*seriously*.....omg....its so sad!!!!! *seriously!!! im actually having tears welling up in my eye while typing this!!!* shigure really loves tohru...and tohru really loves shigure........why dont shigure tell tohru that he loves her so much that it pains him to not touch her anymore and to be close to her while yuki and kyou comes back.......*snif snif*..... i think tohru will understand all the consequences and pain that they will go through. omg...this is actually making my tears coming down more then before!!!!!! the way you write this fic is really good! you got good talents here..... let you know one thing...your fic is the only story i know that is a lemon but has great emotion and reality in it....(hope you know what i mean....hehheh) maybe i should stop babbling on how great the story is and and the emotions that im going through because of this story....*chuckles* ah wellz....but please try to not put kyou and yuki much into this story...i want to see this story as a story that centres on shigure and tohru and the feelings they have for each other....*romantic story!!*.... i wonder how will you end this story????...hmmmm...but plz continue this story as soon as possible okies????
*muahz* your the best man!!! love all your other stories too man!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tOhRu X sHiGuRe On: January 22, 2003 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! you continued the story!!! how mad!!!! your the best man and keep up the great fantastic work!!!!! im actually excited to find that you continued it!!!! hehehhehehehe yay!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sarryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm glad that you decided to continue this story. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Akiko_chan On: January 19, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG....you are the most awesomest Furuba(fruits basket) fic writer ever!! I love your story! That was an awesome Idea to go off on the dress gift from the show! WRITE MORE!!!...please ^_^ Hope to read more of yours soon! |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 21:55 CST
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write more!!! come on...yours are the best!! |
Reviewed By: ?????? On: January 14, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIGURE!!!!!...so hot and handsome!!!! are you going to continue???? plz do!!!! is shigure going too show how much he love her???? just asking...hehehheheh |
Reviewed By: lucifer Maxwell On: January 07, 2003 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Da-a-amn! Very impressive! It is dark, twisted and psychologically entrancing. I like this one a hell of a lot and am looking for more parts to come. Hatori and Tooru have a great chemistry and Shigure is just prefect..I like the darkness in him as well as hsi devious behaviour..he is very 3-dimensional and believable. Just brilliant. |
Reviewed By: Unknown Goddess Li-chi On: January 07, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please do a sequeal to this story. I'd really love to read that.
Zechs is out |
Reviewed By: Artzangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great continuation of the Belated Gift 1, also it is very enjoyable to those that love Shingure and Touhru couplings. by the end of the third and fourth chapter the words begin to jumble and are unreadable. Aside from that I would like to see more. Keep up the good work. |
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