| "Belated Gift 2: The Gift that Keeps on Giving" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rei On: March 16, 2003 21:33 CST
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I really enjoy this fic - I cannot even begin to tell you how much I love the fact that you are one of the few authors who writes LONG chapters! I know that this fic is listed under 'angst', but could you pretty please make it a little less 'angsty' and add a little more romance? Shigure is one of my fav. characters and it's a little disturbing to see how he treats Tohru sometimes...just a suggestion (you can ignore it if it doesn't fit the direction that you wish this fic to take!) Keep up the excellent work!! |
Reviewed By: Momiji kun On: March 15, 2003 21:18 CST
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Oh and jus so u know u put as a brutal SOB but it's great! it adds excitement to the stories. I must have cursed out a million spanish curse words when i read he called Tohru a B*tch....*fists tighten wit anger*...me and friends felt like killing him...I swear if i was tohru and i was gagged and tied like that....when he removes the gag....i would chewed his dick off!!!!!! I'd make him scream "bloody murder"!!!muahahahahahahaaaaa!.....but other than that...i loved it! |
Reviewed By: Momiji kun On: March 15, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!! I've never been so turned on by Shigure's character...(had a few freaky dreams the other dream with him)...It's kinda brutal the way he treats her....but I LIKE IT!!!! He's so...so...demanding...i want a guy like him...i expected this style maybe from black hastuharu (which u should make a story on)...it'd be verrry interesting...i love em all |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are by far the best straight lemon writter i have ever seen. ur lemons are incredable, and ur plot is awesome. amazing how u can tie them so nicely together. i think this might be the best lemon ive read, mabey. the characters are suprizingly in character,and goes decently with the real plot. the only this that in 'meh' about is the kyo/uo and yuki/hana thing... hehe. personally id rather see kyo and yuki... hehehehehehe. but anywayz, u have increadable talent with this stuff, the lemons, the plot, the characters, all amazing. it goes from kinky, to fluffy, its never just one type of fic, i love that. is akito acctually going to come in? kimagure is kool, too. im not acctually a tooru/shigure fan, but this is the best lemon series ive seen in a loooooooong time. |
Reviewed By: ... On: March 13, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just please continue this. I love ALL of your stories! |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delightful as always. Wonderful job. |
Reviewed By: Daeryn On: March 10, 2003 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to review this for a _long_ time and just got around to it now. All I can really say is "Wow." This fic is so absolutely wonderful. The dymanics you have created between Shigure and Touru are amazing. You have Shigure's character down... however aggravating that might be. The boy is digging his own grave *sigh* But anyway, your style is beautiful and I can hardly wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: TJ On: March 09, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just please update as soon as you can. Your fic is good. |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 13:29 CST
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Aww, this chapter ended on a rather sad note. It will be interesting to see how you finish it. Post again soon!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 12:16 CST
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I am glad to see they finally confessed their love to each other. Now to see how it works from here...
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 10:48 CST
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Aww...I liked the scene at the end there and the scene with him bathing her. Very sweet!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 10:18 CST
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Hot damn! I read the first lemon, which I think I forgot to review. Must go do that. ^_^;; Anyway, I like how this started off, even if I partly felt sorry for Tohru during some parts. She thinks he is somewhat indifferent and this isn't exactly the healthiest way to start a relationship, but I look forward to reading the rest and finding out how you develop it. Good job so far!
~Midori^_~ |
Reviewed By: Anime-angel On: February 13, 2003 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i liked the whole thing but the master thing where he hurts her was ummmmmm..... sad!It got me mad at him. Anyway it was great all the way through. I hope to see the next chapter very soon!!! Oh and I hope Akito lets them stay together(hint hint) Anyway i like your story and hope to see more of it. Ja ne ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ·=[bLuE=TiGeR]=· On: January 22, 2003 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man....i actually had tears in my eyes while reading this.....*seriously*.....omg....its so sad!!!!! *seriously!!! im actually having tears welling up in my eye while typing this!!!* shigure really loves tohru...and tohru really loves shigure........why dont shigure tell tohru that he loves her so much that it pains him to not touch her anymore and to be close to her while yuki and kyou comes back.......*snif snif*..... i think tohru will understand all the consequences and pain that they will go through. omg...this is actually making my tears coming down more then before!!!!!! the way you write this fic is really good! you got good talents here..... let you know one thing...your fic is the only story i know that is a lemon but has great emotion and reality in it....(hope you know what i mean....hehheh) maybe i should stop babbling on how great the story is and and the emotions that im going through because of this story....*chuckles* ah wellz....but please try to not put kyou and yuki much into this story...i want to see this story as a story that centres on shigure and tohru and the feelings they have for each other....*romantic story!!*.... i wonder how will you end this story????...hmmmm...but plz continue this story as soon as possible okies????
*muahz* your the best man!!! love all your other stories too man!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tOhRu X sHiGuRe On: January 22, 2003 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! you continued the story!!! how mad!!!! your the best man and keep up the great fantastic work!!!!! im actually excited to find that you continued it!!!! hehehhehehehe yay!!!!!! |
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